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Completely unrelated to the story and a completely random thought: Whenever a mc falls in love or is interested in a women and he makes it verbal he is termed as SIMP , this just kills good romance . All these ppl complain uselessly for everything and that make him seem pathetic . Becoz these ppl are ok with mc sleeping with every curvy woman with a good face and let the mc call it as a one time thing and act all emotionless and edgy . But has anyone ever thought how it would be - A romance between a edgy and cold mc who only shows his feelings to a single woman and she responds similarly . (U stupid's will call it as mc being simp and kill the romance anyways , Coz all u guys need is " mc treats woman like tools for pleasure release and woman go crazy due to it " . But that is the true definition of simp - a man who drools and lusts for every single woman , even if he gives grand excuses and his attitude is cool and edgy .) All authors write harem coz they want to keep u guys reeled in and invested in the PLOT ( Mc making different types of woman his property and not a single one has a fully flushed personality . All woman will have a single label and will follow it down to a T. Like a tsundere always keep rejecting his advances even though mc already done the deed . A cold beauty always becomes loose both in the head and below when mc is in the vicinity . Almost all of them will be overprotective and obsessive of him , and after mc is introduced they will lose their own life , fate and story. The woman are just a part of mc , i.e. , they are tailored into his story and are always available for him no matter how important of a position they can be in ) BTW GOOD NOVEL AUTHOR IS A 3.5 STARS FOR ME , BECAUSE I AM STRINGENT WITH THE RATINGS , DONT MIND ME . I WANTED TO VENT MY FRUSTRATIONS WITH THE READERS .
This novel truly is a gem, far beyond the quality that even most top ranking novels on this page aspire to have.The writing, characters, story, worldbuilding, everything leaves me craving for more chapters, and like another user said, it’s excellent.
I've realized how interesting your book is
I love the Synopsis of the novel but I have question will there be romance involved in the novel as my preference in the long run I can't just enjoy novel's which don't have romance.
The basic is sound, had potential but ruin because of extreme bias.so far the story basic flow is, bragging, defaming, slandering, stupid bantering, back to bragging, then repeat!the MC is ok even if he sometime stupid, the rest however is show racist to the high level that rarely seen.the story also resorting in throwing in name brand to had the search result int the front page with all the key word!
Again people spamming 5 ? rating even before this Novel released any chapter.Storyline is interesting but translation Quality is bad......I hope this will be good and more chapter released. such a few chapters doesn't show us much.
A predictable mess of story telling with a protagonist less knowledgeable than the dirt and mud that surrounds him.
The transmigrator is a villian in the novel.He wants to survive and he can do that by supressing and increasing his halo greater than the protagonist.
best novel I ever read I can't wait for another chapter.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
The writing was good, albeit with some small, but noticeable grammar errors and awkward syntax(Grammarly helps for those.).
The story, characters, and the world, all seem to be developing quite nicely into a story that has a focus on some sci-fi elements and fantasy ones, a combination that a lot of people are bound to like.
Plot is also not messy or jumbled up, and instead, concise and simple to understand.
Good work.
I really dislike it. The MC doesn't feel human to me. The fact that his reincarnation is the reason for the system's existence doesn't have much interest. The romance is really atrocious and unnatural. The Author probably never had a good teacher, given how he pictures teachers. Overall an average novel, but I'm not the intended recipient.
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