80%+ in and the terms "gold coins" "silver coins" and various large amounts are still all over the place.Either the author can't count for shit, or the it's the translators. Obviously they don't have an editor because that's one of the things they'd edit for clarity.
Waste of my time
Is this a parody of Reverend Insanity?
WTF.. is the FL waiting for her second reincarnation? Duh... An idiot. Acting all calm and cool while putting her close ones in danger. Waiting for her enemies to attack her, why not make their life more miserable than which she suffered before. Is she dumb or what? Showing leniency to her enemies.. How stupid and laughable.. it say that she is super genius, are you kidding me!! why not spend more time in cultivation and become the strongest and crush your enemies to to death if so. why waste such a treasure called space or azurite or whatever name is. Is she the genius of stupidity?? At first the story starts well but after going through same plot again and again. i got tired.. WHAT A LOUSY STORY...
For those who want to read this. Don't.
how do i write it here but i see the potential this book has making it to anime world. the story line portrayed im this book is no joke. all the little details added and foreshadowinggggggggg. thisss goes nuts, absolute nuts
This is an excellent story. I just can't get enough!definitely worthy of my daily power stones!!!
I think I can see where thr story is going and I love it. It is a new take on the genre and it is what I have been lookong for. The only critique (if you can even call it that
I love this novel I want more of it please release more chapters and where else can I find it
Overall, this novel is decent but there are a few issues.
First is, the author explains too much. There's too much explanation about some new building and how it works. Some are unnecessary and some can be said as it is. Second, the fact that the MC dealt with no issues with the citizens apart from the fact that they're too weak is unrealistic. People get jobs and suddenly, they're happy and no problems occurred afterwards. In every place, there are always problematic people. Drunkards for example. There were even no mention of thievery in Dry City, as if everyone just turned obedient conveniently for the MC. Even if every single one of them got jobs, some habits, while they can be dealt with, they don't die easily. Mass migration from people of different places should have introduced some problems but for some reason, they were obedient. Also, the fact that people from other places could successfully migrate to the Black Plain without leaving any traces is also quite unrealistic. If it's the soldiers, then there would be no issues but civilians are hard to control, especially when they weren't yours or when the cultures are different. There is also the lack of skepticism. Although the author tried to explain this part, the fact that the whole population of a city just disappears and migrates to the Black Plain is quite unrealistic. No one stayed behind, especially the old people, who are (not all) supposed to be the most stubborn and difficult to persuade.
I'm still currently on chap 371 so the author might have already addressed these on the not so recent chapters but even if he still hasn't, I hope the author reads this for improvement. Overall, this novel is, as I said, decent and full of potential.
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This was amazing !!!Im really excited for the next chapter ?