Novel is quiet interesting in my opinion.....1. Writing quality is upto standards, just that there are some mistakes here and there in spellings like calling a male her and a female him.Some sentence structures are not properly structured...like you can change, "There is not something will happen to him" to " Don't worry, Nothing will happen to him "etcetc.2. Story is also developed well till now....nothing much to say, you can see the gist of the story from the synopsis and read it....3. Character design is also detailed, nobody seems like 2 dimensional character...though you can try giving some characters some inner thoughts and could also give them some backstories to make them appear more real to the readers.4. For now updating stability is also well, as can seen from 8 ch/ week on the front page.5. Don't know much about world background....I mean it's just starting afterall......Overall nice work from Author San.
This is an amazing story , whether it is the story or the characters or just how dark it is sometimes is a pure bliss to read. I wish the author doesn't drop this novel and wish there were more novels like this. Lesssgooooo
MC is an idiot, doesn't question why people will pay a ton of money to him just for him to play a VR game despite him wanting to hide his brain AI. Just giving away his secrets for free. Dropped at chapter 124 (right after this majorly stupid move).
The idea is taken from a Korean novel called 12 hours after (You can find in Webnovel). I don't really mind it even though some of the events are also copied .
What I disliked about this novel - the same old CN cliché . Why? ? ....Offcourse author can write it acc. to his wish , u don't have to follow the plot of 12 hours. ..but u copied events ,added face slapping & cliche plot in between ....
The first twenty chapters were rough and hard to follow. There are a lot of terms and concepts that are a bit different from other cultivation novels and the whole 'editing skills parts' are jarring. The story picks up a lot as it goes on and now by chapter 40 I'm completely hooked. All the earlier issues are gone and the author/translator seemed to really find their 'voice'.
If you like slice of life, weak to strong, slower growth, secret identities, etc... Then this novel is right up your alley.
The story is well written and enjoyable to read. The only things I don't really like are the blatant foreshadowing, but it seems to have gone away in the more recent chapters. I also don't really like reading the female character descriptions, as there is a large focus on their curves and breasts. There seems to be quite a big plot that will show its head sooner or later, but I can already tell the main basis of it through the not so skillful use of foreshadowing. The main background of the story is, while not completely original, a refreshing twist on the usual VR stories. Overall a good read, I am excited to see where the story goes.
decent, no errors and the MC is overpowered making the story kinda boring
needs more chapters to give a decent review
currently at Ch 40 waiting for new uploads
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trust me when i say this, this novel is weird.. i dont get what the author is trying to convey here.. its just not that interesting when u try to read it..
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Your writing style is good. The plot of the story and pace of story development is okay. I love this genre of books, so maybe my review is a bit biased. But, it is truly a great read[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Hello readers, I wholeheartedly apologize for my absence and lack in updating, but please be patient with me as I prepare for my final exams and go for therapy. I do promise to be back late November or Early December, and I will make it up to you and continue on with my work. Love Zoey. And please let me know what you think about the book. Stay safe.