Obviously I'm the Author so I'm gonna give myself 5 stars ;) The chapters will get longer as the book goes on however I want to stay to the theme of a chapter as a write in order to make things easier to understand. This may lead to some short chapters however it will get better I promise
Characters were well developed and introduced so 5 star. I like how things seems unique but I know that it has at least an inspiration. I read the first few chapters and noticed that world background is slowly introduced and explained since it has an uncommon power standard world which most common fantasies makes so identical when it comes to world background. At least mostly, not all. I think I would recommend this to others since it has a new concept of becoming a system. It is more like he was reincarnated into a system and his life depends on his host which he nurtured and surprisingly, the host is not stupid and lovable. She actually learn things. That's all! Kudos my friend!
good work!
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Confusing. His dog gives him a bunch of stuff, and this improves his cultivation or whatever, but the actual specifics for all the stuff the dog gives him never gets explained.Does his SSS rank body strengthening skill actually strengthen his body? NO! It makes him cultivate better. Do those stolen combat memories actually give him new memories? NO! They make him cultivate better.It *is* kinda funny that instead of the MC having a system, his dog has it.
The novel concept seem solid so far and I hope the author continues to develop the story. I've always been a fan of big world and world building, so I wish the author the best of luck!
I usually like reading the Wuxia novel, and I was pretty interested when I found the attractive cover and synopsis. And since I've read this book, I never feel disappointed at all because it's fun and exciting. Finally, I've kept this book on my favorite list already to wait to read until its end.
Overall good potential with poor presentation. The story would be much better with solid editing. The translation (presumably) needs work. A lot of the English feels clunky and flows poorly but it is still reasonably easy to read. Good idea and spin on kingdom building, despite the typical story arc. Some fresh mechanics. The characters have potential to grow.
Does anyone know the raws for this book?……………….……………………………..??????????????????????????????????????
The story is very good and likeable
Lin Fan
Like the fact that the mc is op in the real world. The beginning is different from the usual mmo novels since he had the money and from this fact it can take some time before he comes in to conflict with other clans .