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Finally something different. Great start, seems to be a good quality work, hopefully this gets picked up._________________________________________
I like it...It's my kind of bookLOL...!!!HSKSHGSJJhkaisjhhshjskksgjskdhjskhdgjskhdhjdudhbdjhdhbdjjdghskudjidhjdkhdjjshebhdkjdhnduhdjjdgjdjgdhsjujksuhdhhbnsusjh
I'm about 20 chapters in as is my limit for every novel on seeing whether i will continue reading it and gauging its overall quality. I'm really liking the mixed genre of the novel and how there are so many possibilities towards growth and development. everything from Sci-fi to magick seems possible. the MC is lamentable at times though, his personality isn't very believable and can seem extremely immature. for being a prisoner he sure is lighthearted... i know he's only suppose to be 19, and that he no longer has his past memories but seeing such child like thoughts coming from him can grow annoying quickly. (is supposed to have regressed but some how knows how to be witty and talk back to the guards? lacks decorum and common sense but remembers non-sense such as actors and short phrases?)i feel like this novel could be a stellar 5 star novel if the author spent more time rereading the work for mistakes (as most of them can be easily found if the extra time was spent) and if the fourth wall wasn't broken at all. this novel really has the opportunity to be phenomenal if the serious undertones wouldn't keep getting disturbed mid flow. you have this novel that talks about the lives of others as if they're nothing and how rape and murder could happen around any corner, then out of no where (insert half remembered words or phrases. insert breaking the fourth wall.) it just completely lessens the overall quality of the novel. if author chose to rewrite this without so much nonsense and fourth wall breaking this could easily make it to the front page for weeks to come. best of luck to the author though, I'll continue to read it for a while longer to see how the author develops everything...
Well isn’t this bull**** I was reading it fine and all of a sudden not five minutes goes by that all the sudden 100 fucking lock chapters are you serious chapters that were already free and already being able to read I could understand locking future chapters but to lock chapters that you are already previously released and were already free....... dropped
just read the first five chapters and I'm truly amazed. the author has a great sense of humor so I'll just go ahead and drop my power stone
If you could have a zombie apocalypse with some realism, this fiction goes into detail.There are the tiny errors in grammar, like using “on” when it should be “in.” If you tell the author, they will fix it, so it’s like it never existed.The update is high, and with consistent quality.The story revolves around base-building and character interactions. It works well with the vivid details.That said, the characters aren’t the usual cardboard. The world keeps moving, even when the MC is doing something. He actually gets help and lets others do work because he is human, not the Godly know-it-all, despite his photographic memory. There are a few beauties popping up in his group, but it is forgivable, since they aren’t the usual annoying cast that want to hop on the MC, but can’t say it. They’re people.The world is propped up with culinary tips, banter about gun handling, and so on. The depth is enough to be real without being a textbook.It’s great. I don’t know why there aren’t as many Power Stones, gifts, and reviews as I expected. Maybe we all went broke or forgot?
I LOVE THOS STORY.But it went premium. I am poor. These two things go together as well as Han Xiao and Germinal. T_T Anyway, this is an amazing story, and give the first 89 free chapters a go if you are poor like me. Chapters are short, but overall this is a very enjoyable novel. Don’t hold a grudge for the short chapters.
love it this far
read the whole book so far in a few hours couldn't put it down, so good, loving it so far
Finally I'm all caught up.. And I'm loving this story so far
omg been waiting for this for so long!!!!!! u r amazing muse