SpeedDemon2666d
So here it is...I read the much I could...why not the latest !??cz of the poor choice of mc the author picked.the story base is good ...all details so far is also good...language or writing is also good...but the most disappointing thing is the way author put yhe story together...he wanted a comedy story but the way i found it at least is a crap drama type...*no offense author*then the mc...well he was supposed to be a comedy mc yea...but him being such a shitty piece of work and lame piece of shit with all he does and well as his way of doing things is bad ...for me at least...some might like it but i couldn't...the story has very good potential ...if the mc can be improved then it can be made into an awesome story...now some might say why does a comedy mc needs to be good in the head or something...well mind you people...doing shenanigans doesn't need a brain dead shitty fk mc...even a calm or intelligent mc can do it...and mind you nobody is perfect yea...and i don't expect him to be intelligent but at least use all the options available to to the best possible way etc...well whatever...hope the author improves these things...and if not just delete this review...Just wanted to give my view point so it will develop more...cz it's a very interesting concept and story line...well keep it up...
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I didn't read it yet. But this novel's chapters are released really fast. Thank you for the content to read.Hope novel is fast paced( please don't be slow paced).
Amazing story and nice plot wonderfully written by author rollercoaster ride of emotions always eager for updates guys please support her story
This story is interesting so far and I will recommend it to my friends ????. All the best ???
This is the first time I'm leaving a review without being asked to. I really like this novel. Not only is it particularly hard to find grammatical errors but the writing is so smooth that you would have to force yourself not to enjoy it. Its really easy to see yourself in the midst of the characters and thats hard to come by.The story is a hook. I haven't read much cuz I'm busy writing a novel of my own but Lord this is Spirit stone worthy I wouldn't mind at all if this went premium. If you like stories where the mc is legit the bad guy? Stories like that of the Joker or something, then I think you'd like this. Hey Author, keep it up, I may not comment often cuz I'm hurrying to the next chapter but you've got a loyal reader right here!
The story is very good with a very easy understanding world and system with a truly smart main character that use his ability well. To summarize what i want to say i want to see more of it.
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bruh wrong place, this is a male lead side, did they become stup*d or what? post this on the female lead side, there's a reason why i picked the male lead side, cause i wanted to read a male lead story -_-
MC is little groot who gets bullied. MC make reader sad because bullied. MC not understood. Deer - Chan treats plant MC as a pet, despite being less intelligent, MC sad plant. MC treated like fodder by everyone except big faced man. Sad MC go brrrrrrr. Good novel 11/10.
So... What I'm getting from the synopsis is that the MC is a selfish, lazy f*** who let his family, who always treated him like a treasure despite his slovenly ways, fight to the brink of destruction, before reluctantly stepping up to save them. Doesn't sound like a MC I'd enjoy reading about.
Alright here we go1) The writing quality is outstanding, it has a poetic flow that resembles a traditional paperback novel. the author uses simple yet creative words to paint vivid imagery and the scenes are clear2)The characters have depth to them, each can be distinguished by how they interact, the way they converse and relationships. they have a realistic feel to them.3) the world setting is quite intriguing, it brings new and fresh ideas to the table to enjoy 4)it's a smooth read that has you gripped on edge after each chapter5) I've read till chapter 15 and the plot is definitely something to that engages your interest immediately over all the author has created a very splendid piece of work that definitely has potential to reach greater heights although straying from wn trends, the book has its own charm. best of luck in your endeavors !
