i think Qidian should add books after they have more than 10chapters just so we can review the novel..but anyway sypnosis looks great but im intriqued how did he know about cultivation inside the womb when he came from modern world
Thanks for bringing this novel here.I have read few raw chapters and it was enjoyable but when I started reading translated chapters It was like heaven and earth.Translated chapters are easy to understand.
a very good novel, glad I discovered this story right now. like you already know this story contains mature content, that's also one of the reasons I read this and I'm quite sure many other readers also read because of this matter. firstly, the plot is good not all about ***, but still for me personally, author the proportion between normal chapter and *** was not that much hope the author can increase and make it more constant like 18-25 normal chapter to enco.unter *** chapter. also hope author can make it kinkier and full fill our reader's fantasy, after all, it's the point of writing and reading a fantasy novel. so far ****** with the aunt is already hot . but mc need other like cuckold other powerhouse/enemy, duo sister and many other fantasy ??
i really like novels with cheat systems like this so when I find something actually decent, it really makes one happy.
The story is very generic. While the translations are decent the story and character devolopment is lacking. The world building is also quite generic as I've read many novel with a similar setting
Almost 1500 chapters in the story has been repeating itself in major ways 5-6 times in ways that insults your intelligence. There are gems in the world building at times and in cultivation methods at times. The cultivation pace is garbage in a way that the author seems to forget about the readers with snail pace at times and several time skips later. It starts with levels 1-9 which is crap if it isn’t just the basic beginner plane, and then much later it changes to level 1-3 - probably due to criticism or badly planned plotting. I’m still reading because I’m interested in the end result, but this novel can easily have several chunks of chapters skipped, with the reader staying satisfied.
Hmm. Rough. World building needs help, character building as well. A bit forced overall.Editing good, but needs more captivation to appeal to a larger audience.
Good read and love the build up. Just the right amount of cultivation for me?
The title tells alot about the plot?*Healer(a godly doctor?).*Martial arts(?).*Maybe insert some faceslapping scene.Possible cliché detected!
it’s meh to say the least. man eats = grows stronger = becomes a great martial master in the matter of what 3 days (if i aint wrong; martial warrior —> martial master —> great martial master —> grand master —> great grand master. i think) yeh previously man was a grade 1 martial warrior then becomes a great martial master which is super fast. won’t be surprised if some dude with common sense comes to kill him for his secrets. only good point is that the dude is 90 years old and has a wife and son n daughter. but so far barely any interaction with them just face slapping. like i swear if the author focuses more on his family then just face slapping it would be a more entertaining novel. but their chinese so rip it is what it is
Now this is what I like, the story is simple yet effective the emotions of characters can be felt easily and the author had done a great job portraying scenarios
Let's get this going. Naruto to MHA is a really good fanfic with lots of potential. Keep up the good work and please dont drop it. Thanks and goodluck