Well, after reading the first chapters, it really got me hooked, especially the writing style, very atmospheric, I can say. I'll wait for the continuation.
Hasta ahora el giro de la historia se va volviendo interesante, esperaré que se actualicen los capítulos
I like how Author delivers the scenes the dialogs and the world building, it was quite nice the pacing was also good though the first few chaps were short but overall it was good, and i like the naming sense of the Author , keep it up .
Keeping me on the edge of my seat, not bad ?
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it was a good read soo far. imma add it to my library and stock up the chapters ??
Thank you for the story I am really enjoying it so far. I like it and the world and can't wait to see more of it. I hope the story will be very good.
Nice story, I like the pacing and the first chapter really seems very exciting. I like the character design though you could be more assertive on the use of some metaphors so that it makes the story more grand and have a gravitas. Thought the characters look really legendary. The development is good. Just be regular at updating, and you'll be good to go.
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