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La novela en si es bueno, lo único malo es el protagonista, es demasiado inocente, bruto y tonto, no sabe que es el sentido común, se olvida de pequeños detalles que son muy sencillos pero importantes, lo abandoné en el cap 49, me hace recordar mucho a hunter x hunter, algo así como un protagonista inocente y cariñoso y otro que es más rebelde y fuerte con sangre fria, y si no fuera por puerta suerte y sus conocidos ( amigos) ya habría muerto más de 3 veces, es recomendable la novela, pero si eres de los que se fijan en los pequeños detalles así como lo que acabo de mencionar, en mejor que ni lo intentes, le falta un poco más al autor, depronto para la próxima novela pueda ser mejor.
Dan is a character that is real and I love him so much???. He's been through a lot, and one can't help but wonder, who are the Sentinels??
Grammar can always be improved but creativity comes from within. Keep it up! 5 stars from your biggest supporter and secret admirer. ;)~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels +Get Hardcover PublishHey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing competition, both new and published stories can participate! This competition is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. You can either submit your published works, rewrite some previous ideas, or create a new story if any given examples or tips inspired you! Web-fiction or Light Novel writing experience is desired, so you might be the winner! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact [email protected]
Interesting story. From the plot alone you can tell that it has potential to blossom into a great story.There were grammatical errors here and there as well as sentences where past tense should be used. But hey, we're only human. Aside from that, the story was easy to read and had a smooth flow.Keep up the good work. You'll do great.
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