Great Novel few gramatical errors but I really like it. Worldbuilding is not the best there ever was but its not bad either. MC is getting stronger in a weird way we dont know his full strenght most of the time. MC should get more personality like he is doing 3 things in this novel: Fighting, Traveling and having sex with Monalise even his intteractions with others are bland and he feels omnipotent like he knows what everybody is thinking about him. But even with few flaws I really like this novel especially Henry imo he is best thing that happened to whole story.
I have read your other story and for now i prefer that new one, continue the great work. I found no problem quality /release. I think you can try a bit of pov change, not too much that could easily slow the story But can be a good experience ( I don't remember if you already tried this before) I hope all the best for you.Personally I hope not too much Yuri action that always seems too close to ntr / sharing / big open relationship and far from a harem.
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This junior pays her respect to the hardworking senior..*Bows to senpai*This particular being, appreciates how you interaction with the people.I'm giving this novel a 5 ? because of it's creativity in terms of cover and how the author have a vast understanding in people's perspective mind.Pardon this being for being poor for I am not generous enough. Please support this novel!??Continue this wonderful work of yours senior! ?
great writing quality with good sense of humourperfect start of story with great continuationcharacters is interesting (a lot of changes in emotions)stabile updating with great new content in each chaptergreat world background in VRMMO game as well as real world as story is in game and real lifecontinue hard (hopefully pleasant) work
Amazing story and really unique concept
I am leaving five stars cause I like the ancients world and hope that this can be just as good anyways I hope they can live up to the high expectations i have of it
This is one of the higher quality stories. The MC is smart and devious without being a whiny brat. I am liking the character as well as the game design. The Greater plot line is somthing that is missing in many of the other stories on Webnovel. i also apricate that this storie doesn’t feel the need to explain game mechanics and mmorpg terms to death.
translation quality becomes almost unreadable past chapter 40
Another cultuvation novel which screams "Baby! I am cliched. " Maybe in sheldon style, when he says bazzinga. It will be weird. Anyway, Samsara. Sounds cool. Fingers crossed and hoping for some proper samsara action. Like sending people to become animals, ghosts, and deities. It will be hilarious. Like he kills someone and the enemy says " I am gonna haunt you as a ghost. "And the MC replies, " Ain't no doing all that **** homie. You are gonna be a playtpus and ponder your own eexistence"Btw samsara is a buddhist word. And he wants to kill Buddha. Isn't that like killing your own teacher. These guys don't even do their homework before posting a summary. Lol. Anyway. Outta here.
author is a racist AND xenophobic. This really shines through in the novel too. if that is your cup of tea, have fun reading this book. I absolutely regret spending on this book and the fact that this is even on this site says a lot.
Release schedule , seven chapters per week with occasional extras..........................................................................