reviewing for the event fp. keep up the good work.
The first few chapters are basically warlock of the magus world, just different names, but later on, after about chapter 20, the plot is starting to go down a completelydifferent path of magic. The book has potential, and I recommend reading at least the first 40 chapters of the book.
THE STORY IS kind of great. THE PACE IS SLOW, BUT I HOPE THAT IT WILL TAKE ITS SPEED AFTER SOME CHAPTER, ANYWAY, IT IS A GOOD STORY, AND ONE SUGGESTION FOR THE AUTHOR IS THAT YOU PLEASE IMPROVE WORD COUNT
It is a very very well made story and world plot building. The characters are also lovely and as fine as they can be... it's truly a work of art ...I can say for certain that it can compete with "My three wives are beautiful vampires" should the author sharpen his/her overall skill just half a level ..Now although I am not an author but I like to say that Nyx loved his dear adopted son so much thus if she meets him a few more times when he is alone it should be better that only happened at the start of the story.... and let us know more about Nyx, her inner thoughts, desire and charector ....Hehe I won't say much but there is my inner desire to see Nyx and MC falling in a deeper relationship than adopted mom-son ....and the author can you please give the chart of power levels like immortal - god - primordial etc. I am very interested to know
An amazing story so far, I especially like how it hasn't been rushed. The writing style, quality, design and world background are truly interesting in the growth that is shown in the chapters. I enjoy the fact that it isn't written like other game novels, and that the MC isn't instantly OP. Keep up the good work.
A great storyline, i love the whole image the Author has created. The words flow so well making each read admirable and the pace of the story is steadily, appreciable because of how the story is structured. A great read
This is one of the books I found early on when I started reading web novels. the fact that I stuck with it this long show how much I like it.The relationship between the teacher and the student captivated me and the capabilities of the student hooked me.But now, There is no teacher student, just teacher, a piece of rock for a student, and two of the most disrespectful Duo in any book.The energy manipulator I understand they had a beef in another incarnation, but the girl, I hate that woman.when everybody in the mist is losing something (Nti Anem) find themselves (Ed & Tie Nse). The girl is getting more arrogant and spiteful, while gaining without loosing and using the mist so no one can question it. Really, is creating a religion that spans across realms all it takes is to create a sect/cult. After all she just gave 14 people means to be powerful and nothing else.The Duo kept me but now without the Duo, all I've got is one guy I like being the butt of a joke for two of novel most spiteful/disrespectful characters, and to make matters worse, he's not the main character that he'll come out of it stronger but just a side character even less than the spiteful Duo.
Everyone is so knowledgeable about everything even though it’s only been a few days and they didn’t receive prior warning or anything. Not to mention, those guilds seem to be powerful right at the start but we have no idea when it was formed so it is safe to assume that they were formed right before/during the game decsended. There are multiple plot holes where the MC just magically appears somewhere. The characters talk about talents a lot like “he probably has this talent” when it’s unclear how they have this much information?? The translation quality in my opinion is like something that was MTLed and then edited a tiny bit. this basically means half the things don’t make sense.Currently on the latest chapter (60 something) and I’m going to continue reading because of the Christmas event thing and all this only costs 2 coins.
Keep going . I am only on my first chapter but i can feel the writer's imagination . I hope it gets better and better . Will tell people about this novel. All the best
Very much enjoyed it! The way of writing, character interactions, and especially some dialogue really made the feeling of being in the story with the characters so real that it just fuels the imagination! Amazing work!
Only thing I hate is that I the user is exclaiming the other out , instead of ! Which makes no sense whatsoever. Also whenever the person asks a question, the author puts , instead of ? Which is not how you use a comma in speech whatsoever. Other than that, amazing book.
I will say please make more chapters I think this has a lot of potential and is rather unique as I have not seen any other novel like this one