It is really a very awkward story, but I like it’s situation. I didn’t understand on the chamber. Why dirt and cobblestone? Whenever I create a tunnel which is really important to me or unimportant I surround it with obsidian or iron blocks. At lest create an iron farm. It’s super simple. But have you ever faced an Creepysta? I seriously wanna know. At least Herobrine?
As I scanned, I saw that there were less periods per paragraph that it looks like it was a single sentence.It can be fixed. Also there are upper cased letter in the middle of a sentence.The grammar is not all over the place. No errors and was smooth to read.The story is about an overpowered God who choose to be incarnated in his juniors creation. So if you like overpowered mc with a drop of sexy stuff this is your cup of tea.
Don't bother with this novel. Worst out of the batch.
I've read all the available chapters and this book is quite interesting. Though I am curious, I'll Uriel be mothering Jay? Since she's his guide, if so I would love to see her princess carrying him. Taking care of him perhaps? Though this is a good novel so far. I will be reading this novel in great interest.
I have wanted to read books so I am reading this book because it it really good. And you don't know when something is good until it is gone. When I first started to read you book it took me on an adventure. I love to read books and it made me want to make my own books someday. I don't when I will do it but I will. I not not stop reading books.Some people say you are a bookworm becauses you love to read books. But who but those people who say that we are bookworms it is not a bad thing. We just love to read books. I am going to put some of my own books up soon I hope the best for you. I Love to read book every day and I will not stop reading. See you.
I really really like this book to the point i started reading it and stayed awake the whole night without realising it.Thank you for such a wonderful book.Please keep on updating regularly till this book is officially completed.
The synopsis is very good and also interesting. The character are also well described, I like how the character explain his feelings. Very nice work, keep writing✨✨✨?
I read many novels with similar plots but this is one of the few that actually feels well doen to me and i very much hope for more chapters
"hidden evolutian" yet in the end only using already eksisting templete. bird go to phoenix. lizard, fish and snake go to dragon. fyi "dragon likes snake" not "snake likes dragon
I love this book a lot. although I only read the first 19 chapters, I have to say that its my first time reading something like this and am caught up
Read up to chapter 16
From what I read it's pretty uninteresting with it not really explaining anything like the main character goblin boy, he's so boring and all that's done is fighting and it's not even fun nor interesting, The main focus is stats and evolving but even that is done poorly. The dungeon sounds lame with pretty poor world building and the protagonists background is pretty boring he's the BEST player in the game because... he got lucky with a broken item yeet
Also I think I would've kept reading but fate and prophecy showed up and I hate those. Maybe it gets better as you go on who knows
Summary: a pretty boring novel that shoves you along
I really loved the beginning, the mc was cold, had a special background and wasn't stupid but then everything began to become sh*t when the shameless bunch appeared, they are extremely annoying:
-first they just tried to kill him and steal his game.
->then mc just forgave them for no valid reason.
-then they followed him and invited themselves at his home.
->mc again forgave them for no valid reason
-then they were bold enough to look into his private stuff (while knowing his personnality).
->mc again forgave them for no valid reason
-he tries to work but gets interrupted again
->but still forgave them for no valid reason
Also the most annoying girl magically falls in love with the mc while having known him for less than a week.
In the beginning you feel like mc's coldness and ruthless personnality is legitimate but then he just lets the shameless bunch do what they want and constantly gets pushed around by their behaviour and requests, while having massacred the kids who tried to kill him he tolerates worse people for longer for no reson, he is totally illogical, the plot feels too forced because of all of the inconsistencies in this story and it becomes total sh*t after that because of the annoying bunch.
It just becomes too frustrating to read this when you see the mc getting pushed around by shameless people and not do anything to them while still agreeing to their shameless requests.
Many will drop this like me because of this part of the story. It began real good but became total sh*t because of only 5 chapters.