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This book isn't for everyone. Anyone that expects the standard zero to hero in 7 chapters book won't get their fix. However, it's hilarious, dark, and has extremely clever dialogue / character development. I've binged what there is and I'm excited for more chapters
This doesn't have romance/harem in it does it because if it does I'll go read somewhere else and while the story is good I prefer MC who are monsters acts or inherent the traits of a monster and not the kind I see in most stories where the mc is a monster but still has the mindset of a human and want to be around humans and a good guy.I prefer MC that is apathetic, cruel and loner straight up monster/villain that doesn't need to rely on anybody, use those that will achieve his goals and kills anyone regardless who they are stood in his wayThat's why I like other mc villain such asThe ruined death knight Alien evolution system Cures of immortality Soul of negary and reverend insanity But nevertheless still a good read
The story is interesting and want to read more of it. Im waoting for the update author please continue it ..................................:)))))
I don't really need to repeat the other reviews but I wouldn't bother with this one. That said, what is going on with the new novels getting selected? We are down to four this week and all of them are pretty terrible. The ones for last week were also really bad. Ratings are super low too. Normally there is one or two each week I think is at least decent but two weeks of nothing but bad novels, and not many of them, is a worry.
This pre-qual is amazing the name of the book is very fitting. No faceslap no harmes, young masters , there is only a mortal walking the path to immortality.
Una novela aburrida como las del monton el personaje es una kk sin el sistema no es nadie y no tiene talento, el autor se quiere hacer el gracioso con los cofres y le da una habilidad inútil para tocarse la nariz con la lengua. Para que mierda sirve eso?
First time writing a review here but i really loved your story. Every chapter has me craving for more. The world buildings and characters all are well developed and system also doesn't make him ridiculously op so that is also what I like. ...but i would like to ask a question. If this is a harem story or not. I don't really like stories with harem much cuz they start getting rediculous with every girl trying to get mc. But could you tell if there would be any heartbreak moments (i don't like those scenes in novels) for Em and Leah as they have shown obvious interest in him. Though i will follow your story whatever the answer.
I don't care about Michael Fang ir his territory. The author didn't manage to make me care about the MC. The story was enjoyable for a while even if it wasn't the greatest but at some point I realized I never was invested in the characters and so I stopped reading after 300 chapters.The author never gives information until it's too late. It's like he didn't have an idea in mind but kept writing and when he made a decision he gave us the information out of the blue.One example is the MC's family. His parents disappeared and we don't know why but we learn hundreds of chapters later the MC knew all along why. It was just never shared with the reader and we thought there was some mystery but no.Another one is the way the author nerfs MC to make him struggle. It was never explained why he was slow in cultivation until the author gave us the information. Information which is widely known and his teachers could have told him but same thing, the information was shared when the author thought about it, it wasn't something secret or anything so why the wait?I feel like the author isn't sure of hiw his story will unfold so he describes nothing.MC made plans with people and he has insightful ideas. We don't know the plan and what MC's ideas are.His territory gets bigger and better but no details about his territory. We don't know how his people live, what's around it and who manage it when MC is away. It should be the maid but she is also busy with fighting monsters. 20000 people in his territory, he is away often and apparently there is no governing body.Too many things are so vague, secondary characters aren't developed and like always, MC has a very short time to save the day. I will remove the novel from my library.
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the world background is nice and detailed. u can actually see how the author would want his readers to see the world that the characters were living in.the story is fantastic and the development is thrilling.
I really enjoy this novel bir for last 2/3 week there is no such a thing as updating stabilty ot 7 chap per week. I wish that there was a announcement option in here so that we would know if its on a break or not ?
Pretty good story,... really enjoyed..................................................................................................................................
