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This story took only one chapter to have me hooked. Comedy, Mystery, Slice of Life, Romance and Action, this story has it all. All that tied with good writing, yum. an ez bookmark 4 me.
Since I was a shameless author. I'll rate it in flying colors xD.if you've seen any grammatical and typographical errors. you can message me up so I can fix it.peace out and enjoy (u2060☆u2060▽u2060☆u2060)
A thoughtful and engaging narrative that explores complex theme
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the author captures the fantasy genre exceptionally. this is a great book and a total recommendation of a read! i hope we see more of this up and coming young person
I'm so sorry to write a bad review, but I found this novel to be really mediocre.I read 26 chapters and couldn't go on anymore as I felt that I was actually wasting my time on it. - The MC is as dumb as a rock. He is truly stupid.- The pacing if the story is messed up, on one hand, the progress with the system is way too fast it feels like it's being expedited, but on the other hand, the actual plot (if there IS one) hasn't really even started yet.- There are some passages that are just awkward and it feels like they were just inserted in the middle of random scenes. like the time the MC is going to buy a house and some random secretary starts feeling turned on lol, don't get me wrong I don't mind smut and erotica at all but the scene felt so out of place. it had nothing leading up to it and no follow up either...- The English is actually decent. I don't remember seeing grammatical mistakes and I'm usually meticulous about that so, although the writing style is average but the grammar is solid. I will not be continuing this novel, but those who like stories like this might enjoy it more than me so I still suggest people give it a try and judge by themselves, and I wish the author much more progress and success in the future.
Interesting so far. Looking forward to reading more. I think the build up is on point. Don't know where do Story is headed though which is a good thing coz it keeps you guessing.
I usually don't write reviews. But just copying someone's work isn't particularly a great Idea. It might lead to real issues if they catch you for plagiarism.
A good sci-fi novel who loves 'space' genre.I have read this novel 1 year ago in MTL.Magnificent, mind-blowing, adventurous.I regret reading it in MTL, I looked everywhere for it's translated version but wasn't able to find.I couldn't resist and like a drug addict, I devoured it whole.the story is good, concepts were an eye-opener. if u ever go to space , this novel can be a simple crude guide.please, complete it.
Too much dog food and that is what I love!Please more author!More of cultivation mystery and poison mystery and Lin HuaX Lord Xie Yang!!!Father is also good! thumbs upppp!
