Zefyr
those shortcomings are common in almost all Chinese novels and I'd say this one is one of the better ones.
I don’t even have the energy to argue again next time make sure not to read till chapter 212 but read all before you refute my claims
More update please
When is this book go be done and who the love interest
I really enjoy how straightforward the author is in this book, and after reading the first two chapters, I found myself wanting to read more.
May this book's popularity rise in the future!
The conversation needs work if you want people to be more interested in the story's potential, thrilling action, and enigmatic character.
I really enjoy how straightforward the author is in this book, and after reading the first two chapters, I found myself wanting to read more.
May this book's popularity rise in the future!
well it wasn't as good as i expected, but it is still a good read
as an introverted person i could really relate to the scenery and the the atmosphere of this novel.even when the world in this novel is chaotic , we have an mc who is stuck in a farm .at the beginning i thought that it was slow but then he started to disco er more of the world and his surroundings and things developed in a good way, especially inside the abyss and also in the village of waraka.the world background needs more and more chapters but still, it was a good read .
Great ahh Book!!! I love it!!! The story is also good and the book cover is amazing.Deservs full rating and the author is underated af.May God Bless this author?May he achieve success in life
Hello! I think you need to add more description of your main three heroes early on like in the first chapter, or all the characters for that matter besides the minor ones. Otherwise the story is well written, just needs some minor editing.
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Author with some shame here. This book is not a system based novel nor action based. I wanted to write something romantic just that. I will add anime , and maybe manhwa futher in the story. My only purpose to add more anime is to save some of the character which I think wasn't necessary to die. Like zero two and Hiro . So if you like romance filled novel with op system then here you go.
This book is totally different from Author's other books. I think this book's journey will also made readers go crazy for more updates.
it is amazing from the first chapter.
Best of luck Author for new journey. waiting for more updates[img=update]
