This novel has a slow start, middle part is decent, but the next arc kill it for me. Had to drop the novel because the MC strafe from character. Not going to lie the story Arc where he travels the galaxy is not my favorite. The pacing was awful and it felt like the MC was getting power trip.
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Not really sure what all the hype is about, to be perfectly honest. MC makes dumb choices, becomes OP immediately, and somehow fumbles his way through everything with his absurdly unbalanced cheat. Really just feels like a chinsy dime-a-dozen story that is trying to mooch off of Reverend Insanity’s popularity.
I’m not sure where to start, really. The author’s style of writing is unique and it enhances the storytelling significantly as you are easily able to read into the emotions of the character. The plot itself is unsettling, but in a good way. Scenes are vivid in description and they weave into each other well. Only minor downside is that the chapters are a little short, but that is to be expected from a novel of this quality.
Garbage, dumb mc, a lot of plot holes. (An author can’t make a smart mc if he’s dumb.)
I've seen this same novel here: https://***.royalroad.com/fiction/25126/life-hunter
posted by Karakazz, though it ends at chapter 74. You may want to check that out if someone is stealing your work since chapter 1 was posted 10 months ago.
its very interesting<3does someone know the raw name of this story??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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not bad .
(As of chapter 58)Writing Quality (3) - there are may grammatical errors, wrong spelling and horrible sentence structure. The style of the author does not resonate with thus it always break my immersion with. You need to edit the early chapters author-nim. Story Development (4) - first time seeing a urban cultivation novel that I really like the progression of the story amaze me to this point. It is not slow in my opinion (I like slow novels with steady power ups) and it is not a fast paced story too. The plot and turning points is reasonable in my opinion for it has reasons on why did he do that? What would he get from doing that action? And many more.Character Design (4) - The character of the story at first is emotional but as that sin worm crawled out form his mouth(I think?) he regains his emotion. Its refreshing to see him ge frustrated about something and thinks about something not in a rational way.Update stability (5) - Well I'm just catching up and it has a 300+ chapters and I'm a slow reader because I read the novel in detail so it will be long way to go before I catch up.World building (5) - well the author has great ideas for his world and has introduce us a plenty of superpowers in the world that the MC is residing in.Thought- overall a great story. Had a bad writing but it can be fixed. One of the best urban novels that I read and I hope it will stay the same(the only novel that I read in urban genre is this hihi). The pace of the story is OK for me and the character development for me is a bit sudden but still bearable. And I think that's it. Good job Author a good novel this is(I know it's grammatically wrong).
Good writing quality and stability of updates, but the problem is the story itself, atleast up til chapter 50, where I stopped reading becuase I am not wasting Fast Passes on this if the same quality continues.The main character is just bland, a blank paper that nothing is written on. This might be something that the skill of Cranberry, but I doubt it. The reincarnation part is also utterly useless, and it never factors into the story or the character, outside of a quirky comment about names in this new world.Cranberry is just the good old "abused but not THAT bad
The story is fun and the system is cool but overdone in recent trial reads… the translation is truly bad… not quite purely mtl but pretty close to basic mtl… random name changes in the same sentence.. Pronoun and tense confusion etc it’s difficult to read… also there are two paid chapters that are basically the same chapter as the previous two feee ones which is robbery…. Egregious.. not worth the coins