waste of time reading chapter after chapter of people ridiculing mc for fighting against a fierce beast yet no actual writing on the fight. just get it over with
I'll be honest, I've watched almost all the movies and series, it's funnily scare how accurate it is all from this book. And doing different alternative version and still using the characters. So if you want to get out of the reality and into the adventure then the is your book
The grammar is bad, really bad, one of the worst ive seen on here. Not to mention theres no real flow to this “novel” and its all over the place.
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Well, it's good...Right now the chapters are very few, but so far it's really good...I really like the detailing though, it's really goodSo far, it's a good novel, so... yeah, it's a nice one and you should give it a shot.Right now, I won't say much about the character progression or more stuff as there are very few chaps so, cant make a false impression for you, new readers, but yeah... it looks really promising.I like it
Plot feels natural and smooth flowing despite existence of system. I really enjoyed reading it and humor is great. Good novel for relaxation. It's rare to see such a good character development. I hope romance will continue to progress in this rhythm and this well.
The moment slivia died was the moment my note of this novel got to 0 it was too forced and clearly you didn’t know what to do with Her and let her die to force a Charcater development on a fucking useless mc anyway just the beginning made me puKe
Once a long time ago, a beautiful women, with large bouncy features, that liked to call herself king because she earned it after killing all her brothers, King Yama, decided to expand the universe in order to make a game for phantoms in the underworld! After a long time of testing this new expanded universe, she said screw it and tossed some unlucky phantoms into that universe where even ghosts could make babies! What will happen in this new expanded universe?Find out in the next episode of random author's note!
Wonderful plot. Historical romance described in the Egyptian setup. NICE...Brewing romance in the middle of misunderstanding, very interesting.Overall Review: Very interesting story, the characters are well built and the plot isn't rushed. You can just imagine the story in your head as you read the words and images will unfold with the description... anyways that's what happens for me when I read a good book ;) just like a movie!Suggestion: Few paragraphs are too long so you can break them into smaller ones for better readability.Kudos. :)
This novel was amazing. I love ecah of the cuaracters. My favourite was Cana. I also loved the development of Yamato's character from being a weak and unreliable guy to the strong man that he is now. 10/10. It's a must read.
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