Druid, That Fuck*r.... quin...
Can anyone confirm or deny if this anything like cultivation chat group? It seems interesting and it uses video game as opposed to cultivation, I’m simply concerned it will be a copy
Un comienzo dulce con un final agrio, osea que mamada termino como el principe de Persia y las arenas del tiempo y otras pelis, o angel beats literal se devuelve al apartamento después de esa casualidad y ve a alguien parecido a su primer servant y dice soy tu nueva vecina y fin. Yo esperando que fuera como algunos Protas chinos que se quedan en el poder de controlar su destino. Pero solo eso, jamás vuelvo a leer algo de realidad virtual al fin al cabo siempre será falso u.u
I think there can be more to the characters and there personalities but this is still really fun and good to read it thanks for the hard work you but in to it
So I’m not normaly one to write reviews on novels but after some consideration this novel deservs to get the attention. Now that being said as the titel of the novel indicates the story is a bit different and I mean that in a good way, but hey you checked the novel out so it means you at least enjoy this kind of story. Now a little disclaimer, the story is a bit slow at the beginning and it might feel like not much is happening bit it picks up the pace a bit into the story so even if you feel like something is missing I would recommend at least reading the free part .Now for the more reviewing part of the review, you might disagree as I’m no proffessional. I have my own preferences and biases but I will try to be as honest as possible so keep the non constructive comments to a minimum.The writing according to me flows nicely and transitions in a nice way from scene to scene and helps imersion in the story. It’s to be grammaticaly correct most of the time since it is impossible to be completely correct without someone solely dedicated to proffreading and even then it is hard. That said it was a bit worse the first bit of the story but as the author has grown it has become really good.4/5 Since the beginning was a bit stale but the rest of the story makes up for it.The update stability is at the top on this website as the author most of the time not only keeps to his high amount of releases but when he for some reason can’t he always tell us why and makes sure we know what is happening even when it takes longer than he expected.5/5 Even though this will only be important once you caught up and are hooked like the rest of us.The story development had a slow start with not to much happening. That being said, it kicks up a gear after the beginning and starts taking you through the huge world of achievement junkie and indicates that there might be something more. Many small things that you get introduced to that seems like it not to important comes back and show its importance, demonstrating how the story direction and framework was worked out early on and gives the reader the satisfaction of connecting the dots.4/5 The beginning was a bit too slow started but still well planned out and important while the latter parts is that but also faster paced.For the caracters I can only say that this is the best novel I can recall to have so many characters that feels memorable, alive and uniqe. It’s almost a disservice to the author to try to describe them, so if you read to enjoy the characters this is the novel for you.5/5 Simply amazingThe world background is nice and and fleshed out with even kingdoms histories being described (in a nonrambling way in contrast to me XD). Descriptions of the environment is plenty enough to help keep the immersion but not so much it clogs up the story. All that aside, not only is the novel well planned out, it is hinted at much more coming. Imagine the marvel cinematic universe but novel edition. We don’t have to much information yet how exactly it will be done though so dont fix your mindset on that until then.5/5 World history is fleshed out nicely, environment decribed in a good nonannoying way and there is more coming/is planned out for the story universe.Thank you for reading my overly long review (I just wanted to be thorough).And since you were able to spend this time just to read through this long of a review, know that the story is more worth to spend the time on. At least read all the free chapters before desiding to keep reading or not.
Not bad but the update is slow.Here are some dots.....................................................。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。噢噢俄國誒誒誒誒誒。。。
book is meh, its obv a copyim more annoyed that another week of *last weeks* title finally getting chapters, then WITH FOUR OTHER EDITOR PICKS ALREADY a different novel gets jammed im on a fridayfollowed by the thought, some other novel probly just got cut with no warning so favorites can be played/money can be chased...
This novel is simply a mess. The author decided to use a futuristic setting(about 10000 years in the future) and saying how much people evolved only to paste an average cultivation template afterwards. Every ***** in this novel most likely lost about 90% of their IQ before being introduced in the story and A LOT of the chapters are just fillers,with the author repeating the same sentence multiple times albeit a bit changed.Even worse is the fact that after he started to improve a little(most likely due to negative criticism he faced when he released) it comes down as full blown nationalism,describing the white people as nazi and chinese as the superior humans and promoting the superiority of Asian mythology above every other myths.If you are bored you can give it a try to waste some time but if it goes premium DON'T waste your stones on this trash
Legendary Armament Canon is a story about Zhou Shu, a transmigrator. Upon transmigrating, the main character finds out he is a young blacksmith apprentice (slave) who died of overworking. He uses his system to get out of his precarious predicament and to get stronger in a world where the strong rule the weak.I enjoy the idea of this novel quite a bit. I found this novel when looking for blacksmithing novels in general, and I found the idea of creating weapons and getting stronger when someone uses said weapon to kill interesting. However, I can't help but feel like the story shifted into nonsense at some point.The translation quality okay, there's nothing good or bad about it. It's better than most, and there's no obvious mistakes. (4/5 stars)The story development ties in closely to the main character's horrid personality, but I'll get to that later. The main character, Zhou Shu, works as a blacksmith apprentice, which is basically a slave. They don't get paid enough to live, and three generation's of his family have died due to overworking. The main character uses his system to forge new weapons. This backfires on him, and he is now forced to teach other people how to make a complicated weapon. After barely completing this, he is promoted to a slightly-more-valuable slave. He then invents even more weapons, and the government, upon realizing he is a genius who will probably become a full-on blacksmith, promotes him to a administrative position? They then force him to hire a bunch of people to complete a nigh-impossible order of weapons. He has arguably downgraded from the start of the novel. The only action in this novel is essentially the main character meddling in other people's battles, and getting attacked randomly by assassins. Main character is carried by the fact he gets overpowered abilities. Aside from that, the plot is the generic xianxia hidden identity overpowered main character, with a healthy dose of random misunderstandings. Very similar to "Zero to Hero in the Martial Arts Library" in this sense. (2/5 stars)Character design is downright horrid. All the characters in this novel are one dimensional, and unlike most humans, do not have a logical thought process. Not to mention, the main character can only be described as a pushover. He is constantly hounded to do nigh-impossible task over and over again, and this never really changes. He barely has any complaints, and he is hardly using his system to his advantage. Majority of characters are unlikeable, this novel makes every character exceedingly stupid so whenever the main character shows average intellect he is shown as a genius. (1/5 stars)World background is average. The novel is hardly descriptive, and I don't think they even said the names of other countries. Not much to say here. (3/5 stars)Overall, an interesting idea but very poor execution. Author didn't put ANY effort into the characters, and the plot was sub-par as well. This is a typical cookie-cutter overpowered xianxia main character novel.
Im sorry but this story is just way to slow. Literally nothing happens and the pacing is off by a lot. It's not really filler but a lot of the chapters a filled with pointless stuff. I may sound harsh but I was expecting it to be slow but not this slow. I've read up to chapter 80 something and he has taught his disciple twice. I guess this is meant to be a chill novel but this is just boring. The writing quality is good tho and the world building is also good but slow.
please don't drop this story is very nice. please pick it. want more. pick it pick it pick it pick it pick it?????????????????
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