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Not bad, could use a bit more proof reading! But liking the story so far! Character development is ok. main character is lacking in personality and side characters need some serious Overhaul to Make this book something i would spend money On coins to purchase privileges!
Honestly when i first read the novel, i was expecting something like xianxia: ##### series, but i was in for a surprise, this book is great, cant wait for more.
It's amazing i really like it so im hoping for the author to continue it so i will be waiting ?❤? . .
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Bois this is gold. Tired of your typical copy paste system/cultivation/evolution/whatever non original novels? Well this one is a treat for you, slow story based on emotional and psychological state of MC and his origin with deep focus on love and its profound imporance. This one is a keeper bois ??
This is indeed just the start and I might update after some time, but as of now, it is not so good. The start felt too rushed.Honestly, the previous novel from this author had a much much better start and I would have given it a 5. This modified one just seems too easy and rushed. No system should be that easy IMO.
It’s a good story but I can’t help but want the author to concentrate on farming more. Plus why does song hi have to keep reminding the mc about the farm book . It makes the MC seriously look dumb. Plus there are too many systems it makes the protagonist lose it’s appealing point. Protagonists are suppose to be special right. It a nice story line but I don’t really like how the characters are.
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Love it so farYou do need to add a goal for him to achieve so the story can have a nice progression and for readers to be guessing always good fun. ?
An enjoyable novel you got here. Writing quality. The narratives were clear and nice. Story development. The introduction of the Second life was in-depth and detailed. Along with the items and skills which explained well. Character design. The characters have their own distinct personalities that make them unique to each other. The world background is well crafted.Overall, this book is a great read and definitely going to stay in my collections. Great work author!
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