Nice story idea and characters. That's about all I can praise this story for. Narration is incredibly convoluted, and the story reads more like an attempt at hero's diary than a novel. If you hate novels where autor has to note out POV changes, this isn't for you since the story has no "flow". Might be a decent binge-read at +-150 chapters.
For the story i think is looks good. I am a bl readers lover so i'm always search for an interesting and good story. And i found this one. Well, i can't wait the author to finish the story. Please keep up with the good work. Ganbate!!!
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I will give my honest opinion. I found the plot of the novel interesting, anyone can relate to this MC and his relationship with his family facilitates this, the MC's personality expressing his emotions helps the reader to better understand his own character. All in all it's a good novel.
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Good efforts at the age of 13. The content was good. When are you going to publish your second chapter? One advice I would like to give you that please align your phone paragraphs.Wish you good luck.
Pretty good just add some more dang chapters
It’s a good novel , only problems I’ve seen besides NOT ENOUGH CHAPTERS is a steady update time for chapters of course bad grammar / wrong words used but honestly a good novel! Good luck author and I hope you stick to the book if possible tell us the readers your update schedule or if you can’t just say I don’t have a definite time to update thanks!Ps: I love potatoes and potatoes love me....??
Hmmmm, One of my friends has written a good story, a tale of a man with a beast trapped inside of him, I can understand. The exploration of his development seems to be the main focus of the story.Good job Swan
Really good. The only complaint is not enough chapters.
I keep it short and simple:- most interesting/best non-human MC I have ever seen- no plot holes found until now- excellent worldbuilding (direct and background)- consistent daily updates (even with bonus chapters)- well thought out power system that gives the author much room for creativity in fights- every major character is more then enough fleshed out to care aboutin conclusion: pls read this if you haven't yet
Hi guys, Author here. I am shamelessly rating my own novel.Well that aside, Everyone should know that i will release this Novel's chapters only on weekend.Chapters ranging from 2 - 4 BUT if i have time then 'maybe' more and if i have less time then….. i will hardly be able release 2 much less more. So i hope you all wont be angry with me and also this my first novel so there are bound to mistake. For those, please forgive me. But i will try to minimize them as much as possible