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F***k with this 140chara....... HahahahahahahahaGood job author, make this novel see "the end",.............................................
Overall, the story had a decent flow. I enjoyed the journey from being weak to OP. My only problem was in book 2 in which our hero had so much happening back to back I felt he didn't get the chance to enjoy his rewards for all of his struggles .
Honestly a great read but after a certain period of time it became all about izuku this izuku that . I get it he loves his brother but it's too much it's borderline psychotic . I want to read more about not how he babysits izuku . Anyway it's great I would definitely recommend giving it a try
What the fuk !! Kill that ***** Hua Shi!! , c c c. C. C. C.
Great book, great writing and superb character development. The journey we experience along with the MC from the baby arc in the beginning through the academy arc. The book stays consistent with writing and develops the world beautifully. We experience the MC gradually develop into what is considered a healthy and fulfilled person while also searching for meaning to his existence. 5 stars all day long
Fights in this are like in Kung fu movies, MC fights 30 enemies of same cultivation and they just stand there and get killed by MC while all he gets is a couple cuts. It’s too exaggerated but fine, I can ignore it cause he fouGht beasts in the forest for 1 year so he got super combat sense now and everybody else never fought before in their life.?????Cartoonish Brain dead enemies and fellow disciples who mock him for being weak after casually slapping a guy with higher cultivation to near death. Everybody but MC is as smart as a child.Characters are so cliche it hurts, fatty friend and ice cold beauty who is only nice to MC. Monkey is cool I guess.Plot armor power ups that just fall on MCs head from nowhere, the woman at the start, fine that’s his ‘cheat’, but I can’t help but roll my eyes when an ancient cultivator who’s been fighting poison for 5000 years saves MC out of sure death then gives him all his possessions and asks nothing of him in return. No bring my corpse back to my sect, or spread my ashes in my village. It’s like his sole existence was to drop off treasures for the MC then die to his poison.Not good but not that bad either, it can still be entertaining but it’s nothing special.???
In depth Characters with their own backstories, and connections, groups, the story is good as even though it has weak to strong kind of MC the young master kind of character are basically next to nil, or our MC is somehow a bigger young master so no killing and being chased for it on the continent.This is a pure pet based novel, no martial arts, no special techniques, just different kinds of pets, evolution, etc. The original pets are relevant till the end and the pets are actual beings not just weapons of power or anything, each of them have their own characteristics, skills, etcAll in all a good story.
This novel its actually very good! The author put a lot of work in every detail the story is progressing very well and its very fun to read, although it as few chapters now with the release rating that it was soon it will chamge.All in all, read it its very fun, very well written and the plot is cleary was thought about!
Qidian China stats:Rating : 9.3 (154 votes)Chapters : 1024 Status : finishedWritten in 2007~2009702.6 million total clicks437.07 million words
Not a bad storyline. The book needs some editing because sometimes the wrong character names was used and also the wrong gender.
This is a very sweet and intriguing story. It has got amazing narration. Our scarlet is a very sweet girl but circumstances played the wrong way and made her life very difficult. I liked Chase charachter very much.I am looking forward to seeing how I am and scarlet will make up for each other.??