The story is not bad. But the constant mistakes when it comes to numbers is quite irking. And also I don't have a good impression with all the female characters although they're strong, just offering themselves up like it's nothing just to serve him, be his maid etc. Removing all these eyesores, the story is quite enjoyable.
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I like the novel and it seems likebsomerhing I can get into, but I am having a hard time getting around the massive amount of information. I kinda reminds me of reading lord of the rings I ended up skipping sections because it wasn't really relevant.
An excellent work of lust and love. Makes you think if having a power like Melvin had will be a boon or bane... It leaves a very good afterthought... Nice writing bro.. ????
As per author request, here is my review. Overall the story progress nicely. The growth rate of MC on the slow side(strength wise), other growth such as earning and skills are in moderate range. In MC growth department, overall in an acceptable range. The only drawback is the release rate of the chapter is a bit too slow. It's to the point that I almost forget about the story plot. But I do understand if the author has some difficulty as we are all human and this is not a serious paying job for the author. Thanks for your sharing spirit. This is my review for now if you need more just let me know.
Great read, story progresses at a steady pace overall. Sometimes it jumps a little forward when needed and goes into great details at others. No major grammar issues and a new twist to an old genre
I'm currently on chapter 172, It's a decent urban novel to pass the time. As a harem novel the main heroine doesn't really play much of a role... In fact his landlord seems to be the main heroine ?So far there are 5 heroines: 1.) His landlord 2.) The cross-dresser3.) Crossdresser 's best friend who talks a mile a minute4.) MC's highschool class monitor, and a 5.) National news anchor whom MC had a crush on during college.BTW if anyone can find the chapter: 【172】You didn’t come back last night?please let me know ?
Game elements with exciting twists..... But the update is really slow. Please release chapters more frequently......Hope this novel won't be dropped unlike others...............
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The story is absolutely fantastic and throws a complete twist on the VR element I just switched up the author would update a little bit faster can't wait until the next chapter comes out
The poor English at the start was a little off putting, but it gets a lot better very quickly and the story more than makes up for it. Great series and I look forwards to reading it to the end.
Enjoyed the novel for a while, until it was repeatedly pointed out that the author and main character are sorry homophobic and have an unhealthy view of sex. Out of several sexual encounters there is one that is consensual, and it's not with a real person. Dropped it after it was stated that the main character thought he wouldn't have saved a character because he thought they were "a gay".