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Although it begins in the best way and gives you hope in it, it ends up deseecting you as it progresses, it does not pay attention to the correct use of the powers of the protagonist (who even explains them and then forgets them) implies a plan for continue for the story that then goes through the eggs, the character does not evolve at any time, he is weak, fearful (he is terrified of heights, he is nervous, he is often ashamed, he shows too much his emotions, they can read his mind, etc; and that has the passive ability of the player's mind) and with delusions of greatness claiming to be a king when at the most and is a deku a little more serious. Prota's love affairs are good, Luna is a good wife for the protagonist, Tonks and Daphne. In short, it is a good story but you will be irritated by those errors as the plot progresses, especially if you read shadow hack and the farm before this story, personally I do not recommend it until I solve those minimal errors that give **** to this story that could be good among harry potter's isekai. In addition to the repeated paragraphs that all they do is confuse you.
I love this book. It's well written and easy to understand what going on with characters.
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I like this book! The writing is simple and unique. The plot is interesting! I love the suspense. I am so looking forward for more chapters. Keep writing and updating!
This book is one of the only great flash fanfics on this website. If your looking for great character development and regular updates this is a fanfic for you
I liked the virtual reality world name so much and the main character name as well.. Changing into a new place is really a big challenge. I hope ML will be strong and achieve his dreams.. please continue writing author
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Good story but try to make your typos and misspellings less.Has a good type of vibe to it and also yandere.The romance isn't forced and it's slower than what I've read from the last novels like this
hey author I beg ????????????????? U PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, CONTINUE THIS NOVEL TO THE FINISH PLZ
So far the book is good and what I like the most is how the main character is creating his own world even thought it’s only 6 chapters in I will keep reading for now but keep it up author...;)