I personal love bl so please add more with smut in it oh please wor on grammar.................................................................................................................................................
One of the best, something i was waiting every day, after stop of translations i cancelled my subscribe.
Its funny how the cover of this novel in amazon says "300.000 reader in webnovel". lol Even though there is 300k readers, the future reader will have to start to read at ch 43?? I wonder if that 300k will still raise knowing that the novel that they are reading will have to start at that chapter... But is it really necessary to shout out loud in the cover that it has 300k readers..? If it is really that good the word will spread even without blatantly saying that is has that kind of number of readers because for a novel... that is really small number of reader y'know?
The novel is very good, I enjoyed reading it until chapter 116But as far as I have read, there are some flaws that I myself did not likeThe stereotype of slapping in the face to Chinese novels that no one really likes. I don't know why the authors still write this.Second, it shows that all the children of the powerful, rich family are stupid and jealous, and that they use the resources of the family's wealth and power, as if they are doing something bad themselves, isn't his brother helping him? write like thisThirdly, they say that he is lucky, well, he is lucky, why should you be upset, as if you created everything with your own efforts.
Its a really cool novel. I enjoy the premise of mastering everything, so this was nice. It wasn't rushed and I enjoy the stage like system with the domains.
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Has potential, but the many grammar errors and plot holes get under my skin, especially the grammar, which has mistakes so obvious one has to ask thenselves why it wasnt corrected after all this time.If that puts you off than i cant recommend this one for you, this novel still has its possitives, but i would give it more time so the author corrects the mistakes, untill then its not worth it.
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This is a good novel and I just noticed that this novel already has a manhua. The title is the same, it's still raw tho
Mc is imbecile. Story development is sucks., .................................................................................................................................................................
Why qi, why, bring somebody who doesn't eve know the glossary of the novel and just doesn't even put the effort it deserves, just why?Ex:old:Heaven-killing Axe New: Scorpio axeWHAT THE HELL IS SIMIlAR BETWEEN THESE TWO WORDS OTHE THAN "AXE"another example is old " peerles master pro" and new ,friggin "guru".Please dont ruin this with a ****ty translation plsThis novel deserves more effort
Welp, no more FPs for me :(, anyway, you guys have to do with a summary/review of the novel of 36 chapters.Mc reincarnated, gains a tracking system that can track everything without a limit within 10 meters and if he accomplishes certain milestones and achievements he can upgrade the range or he gains one-time use extended tracking range (for example: track within 10 km)After mc eats a fruit that grants perfect body for cultivation he brokethrough to the first level and his 'action' took a turn as he acted like a refined person... Weird but okay, at least his personality didn't change.Personality wise, a filial son who still remembers his parents after gaining cultivation. Of course he dumped them somewhere safe with some good friends he made to start his journey of cultivation with his 'good brother' he met.Ah yes, in this novel the mc is OP compared to mortals for anyone wanting to know.Translation Quality: 5* (It's nice to read)SoU: 5* (Always, trial read - Qidian, son of bitches, bring back the 60 chapters!!!!!!!!!!!)Story Development: 4* (I mean, it's going a good way)Character Design: 4* (Yes, filial, not retarded, cautious and side characters have a nice solid personalities)World Background: 3* (Yeah, not that much information, only the name of cities and their destinations. About cultivators is not much explained)P.S And, I saw someone saying that the mc is a slave to the system. Some might be disgusted by such a thing and won't read this novel so let's clarify.It's a tracking system, it's a system without many rules. The system DOESN'T give any quests nor any restrictions. The mc does whatever he wants.Ok, there is also an another side to slave of the system and that is that some mcs relies too much on the system and that is true, but it happens in every novel and put your self in their shoes. A tracking system, is it something not to rely on? What can you do?It's not like there is any rules of the system you can exploit as THERE ISN'T any restrictions.Have a nice day everyone!