I read up to chapter 14, story was fine, there was quite a bit of grammatical mistakes, and between chapter 13-14 a character completely changes personality without warning, and forces the main character "ie plot" to do his bidding. Overall, not that optimistic towards the story.
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So far this novel is one of the most interesting novel I have read so far. The idea of being reincarnated into a like street fighter is new and exciting. I am very excited what this novel becomes.
i didn't really get the first joke but the other ones were goodi look forward that you will continue with new other ones in way that the genre that you chose is disliked here in webnovel
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I do love dungeon master novels and am happy you chose the genre that said either people are stupid or reading the wrong novel cause this doesnt even deserve 1 star. Mc is naive, extremely stupid to the point its cringe, and a massive hypocrite. Could barely go past chapter 3. 1. How has he never injured himself in the cave hes visited for years. 2. His love for an orphanage that took him in because its the literal job of the orphanage is cringe and to the point of fanatic that its unrealistic, sure maybe they were super nice but its their job. ok sure this isnt that bad but its annoying and cringe as heck to see him beg for some money and cry like a baby cause he apparently "needs to support his orphanage" which is literally government funded and he should be paying for food and rent which is a much better excuse cause thats not how a normal person would react or pay their debt its stupid. 3. Grammar is eh 4. Mc is hypocrite, kills wolfs, sees wolf leader has kid, so kills their enemies to protect wolf leader. why? because he has a kid?!?! One, the wolf leader and you were enemies until the second you saw they had a kid and the enemies you kill have kids also you oaf and you have no relation to either party, completely forced by author. 5. I hate harems, but i wont let that affect my review because thats a category not a writing flaw. However why do you people need to ruin novels with dungeon masters and recruiting so much, if you want a harem thats fine, but not almost every single monster recruited needs to be a girl for the sake of harem, throw some guys in that arent antagonists or extras. For those who love harems, thats your choice but i will say its better to not put a harem in a novel as a majority of the webnovel readerbase hates anything harem related and most of those who read harems still read books without harems so if you want more readers dont do harem or little sisters. Little sisters makes 90% of readers drop a novel just seeing any words that state mc has a little sister those that stay just hope she dies so they can read in peace. 6. theres more but im too lazy.
honestly the story makes me cringe. I read the first 5 chapters and it is just your run of the mill "My country" great, west bad type of book. Isn't interesting.
It's a wolderful story which give us a plenty of concepts to reflect. One of the things that gave me much satisfaction while reading is the concept of 'good' and 'evil' that is wonderfully worked by the author. Other concept that I liked is the law of cause and consequence, what you sow you reap even though you are the MC. The names of the planet, continents and cities make us reflect about how lightly we use these names and how far we are to truly live their meanings. These things that I said coupled with a pair of other things give this story a very rare realysm which is dificult to find in other novels and although the final part of the story is rushed it is still pleasurable. I'm cheering for your other works, author-san! I'm sure you will improve more and more and create other amazing stories for all of us.
The stories you’ve started are all well written! I enjoyed reading them! Though I would feel disappointed each time it moved onto the next story, I got immersed into the next one soon after! If you ever decide to continue/finish any of them, I’d definitely come back to read them!Updating stability and story development are only lower due to not completing the stories, otherwise I’d rate five stars for everything.
Great story I still remember when it had only 28 chapters ach time run soo fast but I stared to read your another work and waiting for more chapter
WHAT I've read up to chapter 46. this is basically Jojo part 1???. A legendary mercenary guy is using a harmonized breathing technique to fight human/monsters created by the Mc. The Mc is a broken soul wanting to become not a god but a manipulator of all things(basically an edgy Dio) but I rate it 10/10.
After this or before this get update can you work on these it a good book and on some site the author drop thsese novel that are good.plz do not drop these novel ok i want to read them again then go back to see if there update