Hello Author-San, passing by here to give my support to your novel, I really like the idea of telling a little about the past of the world, the empires and kingdoms and all these things that happened in our human lives, I would like to give a tip / request if possible and it’s not a lot of work, do a separate chapter to explain this period a little to people who are not from this region, (I’m Brazilian) so I don’t know much about this part of the world unfortunately, but so far I really like yours story, keep it up!(google translate)
Keren ka. Penulisan yang sederhana mengingatkanku dengan novel penghuni perpustakaan. Teratur dan sedap di baca. Rekomen buat teman teman. Ceritanya juga mengalir...Di tunggu next KakaKeren sih ini harus masuk pustaka kalian