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Every chapter leaves me anticipating for more. how I which I can just binge read it ?
honestly I was surprised. I started this randomly, and the beginning of the story felt very generic and bland. However, soon after, the pace started picking up, the plot thickened and the story became intriguing. The characters get interesting with depth and mostly the story stopped being predictable!!it's a pretty good novel that's underratedand it keeps getting better and better.
i just readed three chaptersyour novel has strong character introductionworld building is goodpacing is balanced not too rush and not to slowsome plot point is like that you can easily predict very detailed it sometime disrupt the pace complex plot setup Overall, the first 3 chapters of "Deceit Chronicles" lay a strong foundation for the story, with engaging characters, a richly detailed world, and a well-balanced mix of action and exposition. While there are some areas that may need refinement, the strengths of the early chapters promise an exciting and immersive reading experience. looking forward
How to Win ArgumentsBy Dave BarryThis is not intended to violate any copyright laws. If it does, and you have a problem with that, please email me about it. Thanks!I argue very well. Ask any of my remaining friends. I can win an argument on any topic, against any opponent. People know this, and steer clear of me at parties. Often, as a sign of their great respect, they don't even invite me. You too can win arguments. Simply follow these rules:Drink Liquor.Suppose you're at a party and some hotshot intellectual is expounding on the economy of Peru, a subject you know nothing about. If you're drinking some health-fanatic drink like grapefruit juice, you'll hang back, afraid to display your ignorance, while the hotshot enthralls your date. But if you drink several large martinis, you'll discover you have STRONG VIEWS about the Peruvian economy. You'll be a WEALTH of information. You'll argue forcefully, offering searing insights and possibly upsetting furniture. People will be impressed. Some may leave the room.Make things up.Suppose, in the Peruvian economy argument, you are trying to prove Peruvians are underpaid, a position you base solely on the fact that YOU are underpaid, and you're damned if you're going to let a bunch of Peruvians be better off. DON'T say: "I think Peruvians are underpaid." Say: "The average Peruvian's salary in 1981 dollars adjusted for the revised tax base is $1,452.81 per annum, which is $836.07 before the mean gross poverty level."NOTE: Always make up exact figures.If an opponent asks you where you got your information, make THAT up, too. Say: "This information comes from Dr. Hovel T. Moon's study for the Buford Commission published May 9, 1982. Didn't you read it?" Say this in the same tone of voice you would use to say "You left your soiled underwear in my bath house."Use meaningless but weighty-sounding words and phrases.Memorize this list: Let me put it this way In terms of Vis-a-vis Per se As it were Qua So to speakYou should also memorize some Latin abbreviations such as "Q.E.D.," "e.g.," and "i.e." These are all short for "I speak Latin, and you do not."Here's how to use these words and phrases. Suppose you want to say: "Peruvians would like to order appetizers more often, but they don't have enough money." You never win arguments talking like that. But you WILL win if you say: "Let me put it this way. In terms of appetizers vis-a-vis Peruvians qua Peruvians, they would like to order them more often, so to speak, but they do not have enough money per se, as it were. Q.E.D." Only a fool would challenge that statement.Use snappy and irrelevant comebacks.You need an arsenal of all-purpose irrelevent phrases to fire back at your opponents when they make valid points. The best are: You're begging the question. You're being defensive. Don't compare apples and oranges. What are your parameters?This last one is especially valuable. Nobody, other than mathematicians, has the vaguest idea what "parameters" means. Here's how to use your comebacks:You sayAs Abraham Lincoln said in 1873...Your opponents saysLincoln died in 1865.You sayYour begging the question.ORYou sayLiberians, like most Asians...Your opponents saysLiberia is in Africa.You sayYou're being defensive.Compare your opponent to Adolf Hitler.This is your heavy artillery, for when your opponent is obviously right and you are spectacularly wrong. Bring Hitler up subtly. Say: "That sounds suspiciously like something Adolf Hitler might say" or "You certainly do remind me of Adolf Hitler."So that's it: you now know how to out-argue anybody. Do not try to pull any of this on people who generally carry weapons.
no word just enjoyed reading even when I didn't undterstand some parts still love it
The story is seemingly well thought out, the world building is decent, it has an easy flow when it comes to reading it. The characters could be fleshed out more but the main character is basically a blank slate so I can't really complain... There's minor errors in every chapter regarding the writing quality but it's pretty readable for the most part.
One star ratings from people who haven't read the book or find a single thing they don't like piss me off (Ignore the five-star rating I am giving this novel without reading it) (;Saw the first few reviews were good for this book, then saw the story only had a 4.0 star overall, so I went through the rest of the reviews to find the bad ones. It was just a few reviews that rated one star, one from a person who was clearly a misogynistic ******* who didn't like seeing a female with the ability to boss around a male mc, while the other one I saw left a one star review because they thought the mc was female because of the cover. Qidan really needs to do a better job with their review system, with the jank 140 character limit to rate the novel at all and not making sure the reviews pertain to the actual novel. Hopefully Qidan will eventually take down both this review and the other bogus one-star reviews, since that would mean they are actually doing something about the problem.
Its have a nice vibe. I hope its not kind. Face slaping cos i wanna read a fluffy story. And if its gonn. Face slaping hope the mc not the one doing it directly... like the gong who do it for mc probbbly
Only Synopsis is enough to attract me, the book is good, writer you are doing great job, grammatically the book is good, but what attracts me more is the start. waiting for more.
Thanks for the update and for the record I have to go to the office and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA
This story seems to indicate that the MC will get to travel to different worlds or time periods to perform certain tasks. After getting an opportunity to potentially solve the MC's illness, the MC is transported back to 1986 Hong Kong where a game-like element is introduced along with a set of tasks. To achieve the task, the MC appears to be willing to do whatever is necessary, even following underneath a boss, clinging to a wealthy sponsor (woman) and underground fighting. The story seems to focus heavily on martial arts, going deep into some historical martial art context.
I've only skimmed it because the story is vague and undescriptive so take this review with a grain of salt, the only reason i am even doing this review is because the author has seemed to confused inspiration and plagerisim, you see if i took the entire plot of the first 10 movies in the marvel universe then changed up some names, slapped it onto webnovel, then started to write a unique story nothing would change. and i saw in a comment that webnovel would remove any novels that plagerise, which is super weird becaue they themselves plagerise for example ED the rights to translate it were bought straight from the author on wuxiaworld yet here it is on this website with a "dropped" status i wonder why, if that's not good enough for you look at 60-80 percent of all the novels in the whats next section pretty much all of them are ripped from Chinese websites, can you guess what those Chinese websites do most of the time. also a side note you should probably stop making stories then immediately dropping it.
