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Hilarious, edgy and fun! At first I was slight amused and concerned by the very casual style of writing being used in a cultivation related novel, such as "bass boosted trap music
So far I really like this novel. I think it has a great potential. I am really looking forward to its future. I hope the writer would be sensible enough not to make the readers waiting for new chapters.
Nice characters. The character background is attention-grabbing. So far, the story is well written, easy to understand, and really gets you involved.Keep up the good work.
The translation quality is superb. No mismatched pronouns or names (not that I know of), which is occurring in some of the new and picked up novels. Many of the characters introduced in the story are unique and each having their own personalities. The interactions between the characters during the development of the story is very interesting and amusing to see, especially the reasonable misunderstandings that occur due to the main characters behavior. Although we don't see too much of the world background, it is only 30 chapters long after all. I strongly recommend people to read this novel.
Sorry, I stopped stopped reading at chapter 39.. could have used free pass.. but felt like even continuing to read was becoming painful.. There are sooooo many books about humans, kingdoms and conspiracy and I hardly ever get to read books where MC is a tree or animal and cultivates.. Even the ones I do find are quite lacking in world building and MC's just repeat themselves.. I hoped that this books MC was ok.. but.. in half a month his progress was good.. then MC gives it all up to become a Wall Flower.. seeing everyone else progressing, fighting over nothing, risking his life for no reason.. The story has become so backwards in less then 20 chapters.. Usually it takes chinese authors 100 chapters before trying to milk their viewers
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The story is still developing but I think it is on the path to being a great story.....................l......................l.............
Its an amazing story with some simple flaws. The setting is similar to ”The Legendary Mechanic” but in a cultivation world. Mc is a npc in a world where players are soon joining. Spoilers ahead: The first flaw in the book is the time discrepancy. The cultivation world and earth have a 5:1 time ratio, yet mc somehow uses a store you can use once every month twice in less than 10 days. Similarly, when one of the players are brought up they are always shown to be streaming without taking into account the time difference between worlds. Finally some glaring huge problem is the fact that mc never tries to study his occupations: Poison Maker and Alchemy. One of the mc villain skills lets him get sort of an aura the more death he has on his hands wether directly or indirectly, and making poison and selling them is an easy way to get a huge body count, but it’s not even considered.
hands down one of the most ridiculous novels I've read, but I'm all here for it! keep it up king
This one give me fresh vibe to Gaming genre. Written beautifully with interesting plot and lot mysteriesYeah, but anyway!I need more Hiro x Liberty, she is just soo Cute!
at first i'd your mc...but after read each chapter...your mc not mc but villain...im dissapointed...i dont mind if your mc copy paster from astral pet...but your mc same as mc from other cultiation
Start out good. Fall off fast.I got hooked by how much story contained in a chapter. It feels the progress is quite fast, less bullsh*t and get straight to the point. It shows how the mc is slowly growing.Too bad after around 200+ chapters it starts to worsen. More fillers, boring battles, nonsense cultivation system, inconsistent mc personality, repetitive plot. I actually read word per word before but find myself skim almost every chapters after 250+. And I still know what the hell is happening. Straight skipping battles, there's no need to bother reading those useless description, jump onto the battle result and you still wont miss anything. No need to remember new technique or weapon obtained, since dozens chapters later it would be replaced. No need to remember names too, they'll soon be forgotten and never appear again anyway. Definitely just skip cultivation/technique description, same reason, it will soon be forgotten and didnt even have any effect on battles or whatsoever.
