After a long time a story managed to grab my attention.. Seems well thought out story. I can put it in words how well this story grabs attention from its readers. A rare gem, Totally worth reading this story
first 20 chaps???? after first 20??? the next 100 chaps???????????????????????????????????????????
This is a very well-written story!!! I am hooked, the synopsis is engaging and I find that I am wanting more and more. Author has done such a good job in creating this story, good luck for WSA!! ??
Author your book is excellent. Unlike other books the mc has great friends and is reliable. Could u please update the book I really liked it …..
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Writing Quality - 3/5 - It is a good read but it's painful to read each paragraph. For example, you always wrote in...Smiling wryly, (Name) bla bla blaNext paragraph: Looking at the interface, (Name,) bla bla blaNext paragraph: Sucking a cold bla bla, (Name) bla blaCritics: Next time, change the way you wrote for a better read, cause every paragraph is painful to read because as soon you made a paragraphs every time you made a comma ', ' the next word you wrote is always the mc name or side character name; After the comma making it cringe to read.Stability of update: 5/5 - Not much to say since the author put effort to update every day.Story Development: 4.5/5 - Minus 0.5 for the mc.Character Design: 4/5 - Minus 1 for the misinformation in the early chaps for the character design. I don't want to be racist so let's just wrap it up in mystery. World Background: 5/5- Very Good!*****Overall: It's a good read, definitely recommended for those wanted a humorous r18 novel. Some paragraph mistakes, typos, and misinformation. But it is still an enjoyable read. Definitely 5/5 for the author for creating such a brilliant work.
我是废土巨人This is the name of the book in Chinese..Currently has around 223 chapters available to read(How many Characters do you need to post a review? never ends)
This novel is absolute waste of time! the first thing he does after he gets the system is to kill someone who he couldn't afford to kill then run away carrying a little girl!
The Description did not Inspire me to want to read it but I had a feeling I should so I decided to try it out and I do not regret reading this!!!!!! This Is So Captivating!!!!!! I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!! please update soon or I'll get withdrawals. SO AMAZING!!!!!
I will give you readers some advice of what kind of the author personally he/she really is.1: I have notice some of the authors chapter are very similar with other chinese or japanese Novels that i have already read, Then I realized that some of it are just copy paste while the author tweak some of the words to not make it the same.2: The author notes is bull**** there are so many reason why he cant update regularly and will make so many excuses why he/she cant do it3: Some of his book are premium when some fans of his/her works spends ss to unlock some chapter then this author will suddenly Drop the novel he/she make without a single **** given.
During the first chapters I really felt that this is gonna be a really interesting story. But there are so many things I really have trouble to understand. 1. The author constantly jumps between scenes often without any intention of coming back to it. 2. In 41 chapters tons of ppl got introduced only to be completely left behind without further attention. 3. The reasoning and the hole chapter with Undine is imo terrible, especially when it comes to reasoning and behaviour of characters. 4. The storyline is in complete chaos because nothing is explained(except for some game mechanics), I can't even try to judge the world background because nothing is explained be it about the game world or the real world. The reader is constantly kept in the dark. While I think this could be a really good story, the behaviour of almost all characters feel childish and immature. For example Qianna(not sure about her name, the girl our MC saved from Aaron) was stronger than Aaron but after their first fight she never tried to get rid of him when he repeatedly attacked the MC. The only thing she'd did was watching and calling of "Watch out!". The list of unreasonable behaviour goes on and on and I don't understand why it is written like that. It takes away a characters credibility and makes it look laughable.
The story is interesting! A 5 stars rating for all from me for all your efforts!Thank you for continuously improving it! I hope to read more of it!Cheers!