I like the character and story, but the writing quality is too bad.
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New but has terrifying potential. I know this guy personally but believe me it very good. I have read it in hindi. It's very good. Hope you guys support him.
its really good definitely gonna keep reading hopefully you don't drop it and finish it and start releasing 1 or 2 chapters a day ???????
I've read the first few chapters and I got to tell you all that the high rating of this novel is not as high as the quality of the novel itself. This must be the author's first novel, so I don't blame him for it being so bad!! anyway, here are some tips to the author-the mc has zero background and is supposed to five years old, yet sometimes he's smart and other times he's childish as ****.the side character are not well written either.there is no world building and we are introduced to the big shot characters in the first few chapters.there are many other mistakes that I didn't mention that also need to be fixed, but I don't have the time to list them all.
This is an unique plotline, and the story is amazing. I don't see much problems with the grammar, and I suppose it needs a bit of proofreading. Other than that, it's a great work!
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The character developements are fun and kinda makes sense. The romance, altough awkward from the start, gradually becomes quite realistic adding to the fact that they are each others first love. The fight scenes are enough to give us action; not too much that it takes over the story which is "Seeking the Dao". There are things that the MC realises and they are applicable too. Not much is revealed because the MC is still in the Novice Village but some World Backround are well thought.
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Really good, I look forward to the continuation!He falls into my library without hesitationI really like the concept,hoping you do not abandon him140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...
The only drawback is that there are no more chapters so far everything is smooth. When I read my heart it feels fresh I wish my life was that easy xD
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