ZEPHYRYfB
love it and very sexual
wow...... nice
84 chapters 3-17-23
Honestly, the dialogue and expressions used by the characters feel one-dimensional and simplistic. Particularly, when the protagonist’s ex-fiancé, who comes across as rather dim-witted, uses the word "beautiful" at least five times within three lines to describe his sister as a way to "insult" her. It feels more like a childish squabble than a nuanced interaction. While the protagonist and her companion aren’t entirely unlikable, the story lacks depth and the pacing is excruciatingly slow. Each chapter seems to drag out 1-2 scenes, making the narrative feel tedious. The story had potential, as the premise is somewhat unique, but the execution fails miserably.
**Disclaimer:** If you’re looking for a romance-heavy story, read the spoiler.
**Spoiler:**
A spoiler from the novel’s thread reveals that the ending lacks any substantial romance. It ends with the protagonist holding hands with the two main male leads while seeing off the academy’s graduating students. So, if you’re hoping for a romance with a happy ending involving the female main lead (FML) and the male lead (ML), this might not be the story for you.
he might've had an aneurysm trying to read this and died.
current chapter 586, still hasnt reunited with sister. it is understandable tho...
Yeah I get what you mean my friends thought it was some k*nky ahh stuff
I know it's the same author, is the plot much different?
in order to enjoy this novel, don't use real life logic, think of it like he's playing clash of clans or an rts game because there are so many plotholes otherwise
Wipe that smug look on your face!! I read mtl!!
(I'm making a joke, please don't take this seriously.)
Oh, that explains this tag
this had a lot of potential but i think the author didn't know what to do with his characters
