This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you ????????????????
Hi Author i read your novel it is good and interesting but I feel there are little errors and not that clear. I think you need to edit your work except that everything is fine.I liked your novel.my best wishes to you.?
When are you going to update this story ? It has already been a year since the last update. Are you ever going to update this story? Or are you going to abandon it?
More chapters please ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
The 50 free chapters have no plot development with it ending like the mc is behind where he started. the book is super super heavily focused on describing fight scenes in way to much depth way to often. the free chapters give no incentive to buy chapters as there feels like there is not plot to push forwards. good idea just way to little development
the story is quite good, there is nothing special about the characters, world background very little but ok for the 19 chapters i read, i know what i need to.the grammer is horrible though, it makes for a bad reading experience.not the worst grammer i've seen but too many mistakes in a chapter to try and have you correct them.you need an editor.once you've straightened out your grammer, it will become way more popular.
Honest reviews are here.. [Extreme Spoiler Alert]This is a novel about MC wasting his time in his bunker for 2 years while others grow stronger and MC try to catch up with them.. Yes, this novel doesn't have an OP MC.. There is a tag "Strong MC acting weak," which is not true until Ch.100+ where he plays secret identity superhero.. But right now, I don't see MC as a strong character..Plus, you will see the author's review, which he asked people to read at least until Ch.10 because before that, it was just a story about MC wasting his 2 years' time in bunker.. I almost stopped before, too.. It is quite a boring and useless introduction..Because his strength fell behind other people for 2 years.. Even a normal foot soldier are stronger than MC when they 1st time meet each other.. He has a companion with him during his time in the bunker, and some of them are following MC, but as you expected, they are also weak.. MC is lucky to find a genie lamp in the bunker a second before he died.. Causing him to receive djinn which is acting exactly like a "system" we know of.. MC grow pace is quite slow too.. Well, some might think it is quite steady, but please remember that MC is still too weak to the point that he strength is lower than foot soldier due to the author wasting MC 2 years time doing nothing.. [Once again, Extreme Spoiler Alert]When MC 1st breakthrough to higher realm, he can chose which element he want to : Fire, Ice, Water, Plant, Earth, Metal, Lightning, Wind, Light (rare) and Darkness (rare).. And the elements he chose are quite disappointing.. Instead of choosing an explosive element or a wide range element, he chose the "passive or defensive" element.. Then, the author comparing MC with Magneto in X-Men, which at first, it kinda cool until you see that MC in action is only 0.000001% of Magneto strength.. MC also got 10 free stat points every time he broke through a minor realm and a major realm (later, 50 free stat point).. And he mostly spends his free point on his agility so he can run.. He kinda like a coward.. He always think to running away from the danger first instead of removing the "danger" itself or thinking the ways to beat the "danger," which I mean is either monster, alien, or human.. MC got one skill like a berserker where he strength will temporarily buff for a few minutes and enter a weak state after the buff ended.. In his weaken state, he is weaker than most weak people.. Of course, he learned a few more skills later. on..Due to MC weak strength, MC is struggling to fight against many people and mid rank monsters.. There are a few times he meets the monster out of his league, like when he meets gargoyle and hellhound, and fortunately, he meets other humans who are in a stronger realm.. He also can't fight multiple opponents (monster and human) in the same realm as him.. Later, there is the Arkhangelsk arc, which kinda boring until he finds out his hidden bunker.. After Ch.100, MC can finally be considered as strong.. He is strong but not in the top hierarchy.. If there are 3 stages, like low-rank, mid-rank, and high-rank strength, MC is just entering mid-rank at Ch.100.. So, if you are an OP fan, seeing MC struggling in every fight is sure to make you feel frustrated.. Now you can understand why the author is not putting the "Overpowered" tag.. There are "Comedy" tags, which I also don't see any of them.. Maybe that tag also means for future chapters, which is the same as the "Strong Acting Weak" tag.. But I don't say it is not a good novel.. People who love weak-to-strong types of novels will sure love this novel.. Only people who love OP MC will hate this type of novel.. That is why I give this novel 3 stars, which means it is not that bad, but I don't mean it good either.. It kinda average, in my opinion.. Well, I am an OP hardcore fan, so my opinion kinda biased.. Plus, it has been more than a year since this novel updated..
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I'm giving it 5 stars although I still didn't start reading because I love this kind of novel/stories. I'm also gifting you to show some support, I hope you continue updating =)
I really super enjoyed this read because of the female leads badass attitude. Especially how despite the fact that she's after a certain goal it's still not boring because there are so many other side plots that link up?
Imma keep it real with yall, this story gets extremely repetitive. It starts off amazing but then you start to realize that it is literally the exact same premise in every single fight. The MC gets into a fight with extremely strong people, gets into a near death sate then breaks through a new dao then kills the antagonist. Its fun to watch for the first, maybe, 80 chapters then kinda gets annoying. Author, if your reading this, make the MC more clever in his fights. Don't just make the same shit happen over and over again.
You should remove it from "Original" this is a cheap and bad copy of Douluo Dalu You should remove it from "Original" this is a cheap and bad copy of Douluo Dalu