Black dragon with heram system

This novel  is great..i can't srop reading..more chapter please..i want more....love the character..so cool and kind...thank you for your hardwork writer...Make more chapter please..i can't wait anymore...

Shameless Author here, with a shameless review.I wrote this novel some years ago, and it is complete. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there are some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud over it and enjoyed it thoroughly. This story is about following your dreams and being true to yourself. I hope you will give it a try and enjoy it. It is after all, complete.I am currently writing quite a few novels, and amongst them is the complete series Overthrowing Fate (Also on this site and completely updated), Condemning the Heavens (Also on this site, ongoing) and a few romance novels, amongst these one romance novel called Forsaken Immortals (Also on this site, ongoing), which is a cultivation romance novel. If you like my writing, please give it a try!

Amazing novel everything was good. The character design was amazing and the world building too and the descriptions as well. Although the first hundred chapters had a few things that used to make me annoyed what made me even more annoyed was the moment you enter chapter 500 everything just starts becoming rushed the worst thing was how rushed the ending was which made it horrible i was loving the novel until the ending made me feel like I wasted my time the novel couldve instead kept on progressing with the mc killing (dont wanna spoil) the enemy and then progressing to the next relam after breaking through and taking his family with him or just going there and one day his son also reaches that relam and they progress on together which would’ve been amazing

Right at the first chapters of this ****show you can notice what most living beings dread... EXTREME PLOT ARMOR.The mc is just an asshole to the king and can just escape the palace without any repercussion, right after that he is forced by a drunk guild leader to enter his guild... guess what?! He just bows down, because he is a strong and independent (e d g y) Mc that won't be a slave to those damned kings! Even if the way that he does that is by plot armor and is ultimately meaningless! Yeah! You go Main character!

I love the concept of this novel but I cant accept the fact that the mc went from being rebellious to being a servant who completely adores his owner. I know that they have been together for a long time but the girl treated the mc like dirt and you expect me to believe the mc has become completely loyal from this.

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