I love it. Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
Very interesting!Writing quality: Very good actually, couldn't find errors, lots of vocabulary and nice sentence structure.Story development: *little spoiler so beware*Mc plays a game then doze off to find himself in that game. There are many like him and some even before. In the game they need to pay a loan and that's all otherwise it's gonna be a full-scale spoiler.character design: Yeah basic like every new novel. No uniqueness but that's ok updating stability: Yeah I think this one there's no need to say anything World background: Interesting premises, I read something rather similar where everyone kinda have an island for themselves but its dropped so I think that author is not even gonna know but yeah the background kinda similar.A lot of potential so I hope it gets picked
well, you may not consider this a review at all, just a compensation for the low review they gave, Doesn't deserve perfect rate but decent point will suffice. Sloppy start but becoming interesting as the time passed. I just want to witness the hypocrite man's doom (the one who put green hat to mc), I dunno why, kinda irritates me whenever I see this so-called-good-man with his b$tchfriend. Well I'll be your reader 'till then, don't fasten the events, your present pace is good, We/I will wait, nice.
as of chapter 40 I'm liking it quite a bot. MC's ability is a complete cheat and it's kind of funny how effortlessly he gains power. MC is very likable.
I like this Webnovel quite a bit, the whole void walker thing is pretty interesting as well ?
Your writing has truly captivated me - it's a masterpiece! Are you considering releasing a revised edition or exploring innovative ways to share your work with a wider audience?
*This novel actually gets a 5 in every category so far* this is the second novel by this author on webnovel and it builds on his writing experience so far. Great descriptions of emotion and rationale with steady pacing and awesome worldbuilding. The setting in space exploration with a pretty standard "modern cultivation" theme leaves enough open ends for several thousand chapters. The the culmination of the 3rd arc (2nd major arc + 1 introduction arc) on planet Istrone is amazing and creates an opportunity for steady foundations to come. This is essentially a review of what you can expect out of up to chapter 75. (The free chapters.)
By far the best book on this platform. Remember to read the prologue otherwise you won’t understand who Carl or Chris or Ezio are. A great plus of this story is that there are no gratuitous good guys or bad guys, with one exception. The characters deemed to be protectors, guardians, are often passive in front of evil bacause they deem it necessary. Likewise, «evil» characters are not defined by their crimes and have believable motives and dreams that actually could change the world for the best. The main character also frequently does good for the wrong reasons.There is a love square, but the mc doesn’t allow himself to be tortured by it. He is able to resist the seduction of his love interests, especially when he thinks that love might be immature, that it might exist for the wrong reasons.
Vanessa how can you make such a big mistake?
I love this book. Muse is a great writer that makes you fall in love with the characters. There is always that one character that you want to punch as well. There are twists and cliffhangers added to the mix. She made me binge read this book, like every book I have read of hers so far.
Kind of biased but I kind love this story! When I read this one compared to the first one, I feel like my writing has grown so much! :)
Absolute worth reading!!!! Loved every bit of the story