Before anyone reads this novel, the character will always be referred to as "upbeat" young man. It's kinda comical at the beginning because he's in terrible situations and still referred to as "upbeat" but by the 10th chapter it's just unbearable. There's quite a few grammar and spelling errors, but that's quite common on here. The story really doesn't flow well and there's no depth to the MC at all. He doesn't question anything and makes dumb decisions.
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أستمر أنا صديق يوسف محمد وقال لي ان صديقه كتب هذه الرواية وأنها جيدا جدا يوسف يشكر فيك جدا يا زياد ولكن العيب كما قال يوسف أن التنزيل بطئ و أن الشخصية الرئيسية قوية زيادة عن اللزوم .
I wish a good life for our female lead at least she will be able to fight for herself
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Nice work author please keep uploading !!!
Yet another good book??,the adventures Toby has in that system of his is just wild lol I love it
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I may just have high quality taste in novels but, so far really nothing has happened at chapter 12 we have gotten no introduction to the world only a bunch of children acting like adults and our MC an adult goofing off. He knows how big of an opportunity it is to learn and he’s just skipping classes and not attempting to learn anything or trying to train after he was told how far behind he is.