I personally see no flaws in the story, characters, or world. The author has written a true neutral evil anti-hero and it’s beautiful. For a undead all the main character’s actions make sense for the way he should think. I look forward to his character development and wonder if he will find any shreds of humanity in him left over from his previous life as a human and how that will affect his goals in the world.
Just read the futunari chao and its was samng wrong and the mc is bland that he just goes everywhere being evil withiiut a reason buy only a physic of seven sins to push the plot forward I mean I like your world plot your setting and every thing else but this stunt pulls it's down the drain son what next a whole Continent field with disease spreading futunari that while soon conquer the world all because he wants to be the only man to **** all the women in the world well guest what he ist cause they got dick 2 he's just being too childish that even the joker would laugh and 3 just read grasping evil learn what evill means with morals while still having a personality and 4 this chapter was wrong on all levels I hope u don't running hedonist sword god my d Still haven't recovered yet sign road to kingdom has giving me th is of feeling but never gave me this kind of ****..........,...............
I wont deny, i enjoyed book.. it is one of the very few system based novels that i like, but unfortunately there are two huge loopholes in the plot in recent chapters. that turned my mood sour. 1. about khrom and rayna: khrom was incredibly guilty after he misjudged his wife and killed he, but suddenly he started new married life, just after a few months.. how does that make sense?? i would have no complaints if his wife was killed by others, then the story makes sense.. but when aythor added that he misjudged his wife, killed her and incredibly guilty for his action, romantic development with rayna doesn't make sense.2. this one is way more fatal than previous one. both siblings seldom remember their parents. okay, even if i understand that they are worried inside, but dont have the power to do anything, thats why they are just waiting.. thats also good. but suddenly mc went on a business trip, he didnt think that his parents can come back in mean time. okay they were aboyt to come back in some days, so that does not matter. most importantly, after accidentally arriving into anothet empire, why are they settling down. instead of going back.???? why did her sister said nothing when mc proposed to start a shop in the capital??if author notice my review, i would be grateful if you are kind enough to give me a proper explanation. or please correct these two loopholes, such obvious loopholes hurt my head. anyway, you rock, thank you for writing such an amazing book. please dont make it trash in later stages, or i will cry.. for me this is a master piece
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LOVE it ???. Just hoping the author don't drop this. its one of my fav where the mc is strong and on the way to become overpower but mc not overpower from the start.And its NOT a harem as well, i was a little disappointed as he seem to only loyal to one wife while i was hoping for 2 or 3 wives. but author seem never upload any new chapter recently. Please author NEVER drop
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I find this beginning very interesting hopefully this continues to see where this goes
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I'm really enjoying this book, with reincarnation,isekaied, & gaming element in VR... i hope the author PcSM always in healthy and make more writing like this....
so from the synopsis this reincarnated npc is bitter about another game(world)? cause his was ignored? and is now trying to ruin it, wow this is one of the worse goals I've seen, he probably broke when he realized his world and what he knew wasn't real