too much talking when fighting, and I dont really like that, poor grammar, and lacks of information.I could only read until the "kidnapping of lily, by squall" chapter, because it was written so poorly. Without update stability, this would only be rated 2 overall. But because I didnt really finish it, I'd give it a 5 for Update Stability. Prob gonna comeback in the future, but for now, Im just gonna read another one.
You writing a new novel??!!! Then what about 'A warrior's path'? Will we still get updates??!!! Need answers. Gooddamng 140 characters rule!!!
Nice story. I like it so far. Remind me of reverend insanity. No romance so far. Anyway hope not a harem. Harem seem unrealistic to me. Also hope there is unreasonable plot armor.The one thing that sort of bug me. Is how grave robbers come the day he woke up. Like out of last 3 month they come now. Right when he woke up. Out of the last 90 days. They come now. Isnt that a little coincidental.
F*ck those tashy sinopsys... i dont even want to open the book. Dont judge my review when all other are just «i want more» or «its like god emperor(idk it)»
What a wonderful book this is. You can't help but get drawn in and connect with the characters. This book is very hard to stop reading because of the cliff hangers it has through out. Definitely one of the best reads so far
Thank you for posting this wonderful novel I'll give it 5 star !I really love your work Every plot and characters were very portrait beautifuly as I would like to see every updates everyday . It pique my Interest would love to see more chapters in the future. ?
Two chapters were enough to lure me, the setting, the characters and story and thriller was soooo.goooood and very well done,gonna add this library no dount.
This story is a must read for those who seek adventures and especially who love Sci-fi fantasies..!! This author is best in imagination and character design..!!Hope you all get to read this wonderful story..!!
This is unique! Very unique novel. It is so nice to know that someone has a good imagination and thus, can write such interesting novel. I am amazed and mesmerized. And also, I am speechless. This novel is worth reading it.
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This book.....I'm short of words. Firstly, the words, the way he matched them together...oh no! You're great. The characters are also good. I love this book.... expecting more from you soon
At first I was skeptical, but after the first chapter I realized this was hilarious. The part when the main character gives the “dragon” To the officer had me rolling!I want to know more about his class, so please keep writing!