1-Translation quality is good, following the story is not hard and I can understand the writer idea.2-There is a lot of humor elements, at this point there is only 41 chapter, I need to read more in order to make a better judgment.3-This is a gender bender story, but because of the MC personality you can forget that the MC is actually female.4- world building need more information, most of the chapters are centered on the MC isolated life, there is a few sneak peaks of what type of world it is but I wish to know more.In conclusion, this novel is worth to add to my library. you can give it a chance too.
Shang'a:I love invisible dragon
invisible dragon sad dis as he fell
1. Writing Quality : - Below Average. Readable ,but not pleasant enough to be immersive in any way. I would probably call it pretty Xianxiac in all honesty . So , if you are expecting at least an O.K prose, you would be disappointed. 2⭐2.Stability of Updates:- Author is seriously consistent for the most part, though nowadays the updates are frustrating to be completely honest.4⭐3. The Plot:- Ok. Fujin sucks. That's the main problem here. The MC is 'grey' in morality(seriously doubt it) , does whatever the hell he wants , leaves his teammates to die(mieko -_-), kills civilians , all in the name of fame and the DAO OF SHAMELESSNESS!(beyond cringe). His conversations with Hiruzen or any elder do not belong to this universe. They are fake and artificial. You will NEVER feel attached to them . Furthermore, author actively bends the story for its MC . Chakra Crystals-_-. Really!? That was a seriously bad move. I know you want a stronger MC. Everyone likes one. But The MC's strength MUST MAKE SENSE! There is also the insane glazing that goes all around him that puts me off. WHY are they groveling under him??. What is this weird sentencing ,Man! Let the story flow naturally by showing everybody's emotions (shocked , horror, terror). Don't put Xianxia reactions out there . ????.1.5⭐
i understand that it is hard for you to comment because of this Erotic novel but atleast till me something if the story is good to read or bad, i can not give answers to my self it depends on you readers so its on you to decide.
I can't in good conscience give you anything more than one and a half stars because despite knowing your novel is unedited, you continue to upload new chapters without fixing the flawed ones.
A fascinating read, world-building, and the description make it feel so realistic and the quality of the writing skill is really good, great job author. It's a read i'll recommend
Leo: wait! who am I to protect? What am I ending?
It's really well written and different from other girls novels with a system! But it's slow. A fantasy, carefree mode lol! There aren't bad guys, just ants. I couldn't continue in many chapter there are a life of tranquillity.
The title makes it sound like the whole gang got reincarnated, which would be pretty unique. Haven’t read it yet, but the synopsis reads like that isn’t the case here :(
5 stars for no system just keep doing you author ?
I was immediately immersed in poor Seraphina's story. Looking forward to what would happen to her after the marriage. Keep updating, author.