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I was surprised to find the translation for this on here. I'm currently reading the original paperback. This is an interesting read to help kill time. . .and I am low-key waiting to see Sid's reaction to when he finds out that all his bs lies aren't the facade he perceives them to be.
I like this novel it's good for me, a lot of people are quite quiet when reading this but the story is good, the twist was nice put, the writing is fine but a few spelling errors but it's doesn't change reading of the story which is fine by me, the world back ground were great it took me some time to figure out where the MC were at but still great overall I recommend this novel.
This story falls in the same pit of those other authors using the "old man" age without actually have the mc act smarter than your average 12-18 year old mc in other stories.could not read pass 5 since it weird me out when I see the mc acting like that (and no, mc is not acting to hide anything since it's him speaking to himself, already giving me an idea of what his actual mental age actually is)If you skip and ignore tha "old man" then it's ok. I think it's the same level of writing/plot you are probably accustom to in this site.
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What an incredible story, I don't know why but I can't stop reading it. I feel that the situations in the plot always hold me back, I like the personality of the MC and his father.???
Obviously this isn't finished so I can't give it a comprehensive review, but so far the story is quite endearing. The title made me think that there would be a system that literally used apocalypses or something, but the system ended up being surprisingly tamer than that. It's definitely a "weak to hero" type of deal, which is nice in its own way. The pacing is a little off and the worldbuilding seems to be rushed in, but that's of little fault on the author's part considering he/she has only had a few short chapters to get things going and developed. The grammar is a little shoddy at times, but the story is definitely readable. Overall, I would say this story has potential and draws upon many of the common elements that make a cultivation story a popcorn read.
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Just the title itself suggests many things: the settings, the character, and the probable plot. I’ve took my time to scrutinize — and thus I’ve reached about 12 chapters. Kind of slow because I was also reading another book. Anyhow here’s how it goes:As a fellow Filipino, it dreaded me how awfully good the settings and concept were integrated to the story. It would be self explanatory why that is the case. Poverty is a huge issue in the country and alleviating it would take time. The characters are good, constructed well and has a depth to them. There are a few errors in text, but overall a good read. I would advise to write more description to engage the reader’s imagination more.Overall, a good read. Keep up the good work.
Hmmm very interesting, haven't really seen this concept anywhere else. Keep up the good work author! Other than that is was a bit confusing in the beginning, I must say it has a unique taste to it
You sound a bit too aggressive in the synopsis. tbh
I'm giving it a 4 star not because at this current time I think it's deserved but because of the potential I feel like the story might have and how initially I was pumped to read it. What aggravates me about this story is the fact that 60 chapters in and he's still extremely weak as hell. Not only is he weak though but for someone making fun of him he wants to have them killed. I can understand wanting to get revenge but getting revenge when you're pitifully weak just screams stupid. Not only that but he acts pretty arrogant rather than confident from how he comes across. I also think his growth potential with his physical stats should be a lot more dramatic seeing as he has a healing ability. He should be able to enhance his stats a lot by exercising till exhaustion, eating a lot of food and then healing the damage to build stronger but he is not taking advantage of this much from what I've read.Just in the recent chapter he faints from training but he should be at a higher level of fitness just with his exercise from before and healing. I enjoy a fair bit of this novel in terms of setting, system and the magic idea in general but I can not support characters who don't think straight. The story seems to be picking up right now so that's good and hopefully this review becomes 5 stars when it does get better. Overall it's pretty good but has a lot greater potential in my opinion