man story is good but there are two problems mc is growing too slowly i will say how can he be mc with such slow growth he thinks too much. .. 2nd is story is like fillers real content is very less all chapter are like fillers and nothing. . if you want to level up quality of novel make mc growth acceptable not fast but not too much slow as now or how can he survive and give main content then filler which is happening now
This is definitely one of the better dungeon novels.It has a nice story so far. And the most important thing is that it definitely will last for sometime as long as the writer doesn't drop it.
This story is too good to be true!!!! I’m seriously hooked to this story!!!! Pls never stop writing this!!!????????????
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It was intriguing from the beginning chapter itself. Action! Yup just my kind of thing. I'm really very happy to read and review your work. It's just Mamamia!!!! Keep it coming. Feed me more. Author, are you a magician? The scenes with detailed explanation just transmigrated me to your world. Haha. Loved it.Not giving any spoilers so that your readers won't pass from here itself and will read it. Do read it people it's worth your time.
One of the rare stories where MC reincarnates as a NPC in a game. Story and characters are interesting so far.Issues with inconsistency. Like:Paragraph 1: You can only mine iron and copper ores with Mining level 1. Higher tier ores need higher Mining level.Paragraph 2: You need 5,000 exp to go to Mining lvl 2, but if you get really lucky you can mine a few high level ores and instantly level up.Author sometimes rewrites the rules for how things work the very next paragraph.
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I haven't personally read yet, but from the synopsis I hope it doesn't fall below my expectations. Future readers should give it a try. Keep updating author
I think the first guy was wrong this isn't like RSSG its more of a cross-over between RSSG and A New World. Has an MC that uses knowledge of the pass to get ahead of everyone else (check), uses that same knowledge to get legendary class, weapon, and armor when first logging in (check), Uses knowledge to setup up a guild building, hire craftsman, create guild, to not only farm karma but to get further ahead; stating later that the guild building will be useless later on (check).This isn't like A New World where it takes 100 chapters to get to the next day because the author over explains everything to even what type of dust is on the ground. But at the same time, this novel doesn't really say a whole lot either, at least so far...I try to read the first 50 chapters before leaving a review, more so if I want to see how things play out or if I can't make up my mind; for example what I did for "Bloodline system" I read till chapter 500 before I left a review". But, I've read up until chapter 60, and really reading this is equivalent to "I did this in game, then this, then this, and this happen, then I did this, and this, and this, and look I'm so lucky...btw my world is on the brink of destruction, with pullulated air, barren fields & crops, zombie's, massive radiation, etc...but hey we're fine now because I moved us to a better location, so we can play this game that the government is forcing down our throats"...and then I did this, and this, and this,.....haaa it makes no sense lolFor those reasons I rated this as a 2.8. It's not bad but, story wise it doesn't make sense why; if his world was full of such destruction the government would force everyone to play a game; when their REAL bodies would still be in a fallen world....
A fun adventure that reaches the hearts of both video game and fantasy lovers. Following the story of Jack and his growth feels real yet fantastic, giving a unique vibe and read. There's comedy and emotion laced in every part of the story so that you can better understand the characters and the events taking place.
The idea is good and the story should be ok but the writing quality is just too bad.
Apex, did you drop this novel? it seems there hasn't been an update for a month now.