It's a very detailed yet entertaining masterpiece. The flow of events are somewhat amazes us with some unexpected twist. It's like we are being loved by reconnecting to the past yet uncovering some mysteries. This novel deserves a standing ovation. ?
Idk bro i like it xD but it’s my story soo.... jk, hope u guys enjoy. This has taken years for me to construct. It’s been uploaded on Wattpad for the longest time. I hope this new app will expose an even bigger audience to my work.
I love this story concept so much and the wrighting quality is really good. I’m not really an expert on the English language or anything but I didnt notice any misspelled or incorrect words that would decrease the readability. Also vivid words that help visualization and immersion. The story progression so far is decent, bogging down the story by going over what he did every day through the time skips gets rid of unnecessary info that can slow down the story and make it less enjoyable too read. Another aspect that f the story I absolutely adore is the structure of the world.how the fables die when forgotten and how the have their own separate world. Usually I find it difficult to get into a system novel because they rarely ever touch upon how the Mc is getting stronger just from killing thing. Where is the system getting all that power too give it too the mc. the system in this novel from what I interpreted is mostly administrative in nature. As in they don’t don’t get their power from the system, the system just helps them focus and understand thier power. I love this novel and I sincerely hope it continues.Last but not least: cute and innocent little elves brutalizing people while smiling and giggling??? gotta love that.
I really thought this story was deleted. It was in my library and it seems that I can't read it. (Been away for a year) And then I found the announcement chapter and yeeeeees. Followed again ??
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It's a good story and i really enjoy reading it. Although sometimes i feel the story is too safe, no hard conflict at all...maybe the author just wants to highlight the love story between FL and ML
It's okay, though sometimes I feel like the novel was written by an AI, a few plot holes, and the story just processes too quickly, also doesn't feel like the main character has any actual problems or challenges, as he usually always wins
i love the story so far had me reading start to finish and no book can grasp my attention like that. So please keep updating the book i really love it so far also this is my first time writing a review and all that says something.