The Eve of Ashes

What I find the most interesting is the fact it's written first person which I find one of the hardest ways to write a story. I really love the concept and I hope the author keeps going with his perspective. This is a unique gem I think and feel this could go far. I def recommend it.

A great novel that is poorly translated and edited after chapter 41. From chapter 1-40 it is great, very enjoyable and perfect quality but then becomes machine translated garbage after chapter 40. Really what on earth is going on here…..

An above-average story brought down a little by its poor translation quality. It's not as bad as some people are suggesting by comparing it to MTL, but it certainly isn't all that great. If you skip the random sentences that don't make sense, the novel is still readable. One thing to note is that you will find the usual arrogant dumb characters trope, though thankfully a bit watered down. Overall, it's better than a lot of other garbage, but it isn't exactly a high tier novel. Mid level novel, good if you don’t have other exciting stuff.

C+, decent ideas but feels like an immature wine. Give the author some time develop his writing style and hopefully the quality of the storytelling will improve with it. Check back when it hits 100 chapters. Hopefully it will be binge worthy.

High expectations because of top reviews here but... sigh..For me, its just average, in bad terms, its lame :/I was expecting a somewhat op but not overly op, just strong to stronger genre, cause you know, an ancestor, strongest hero/warrior, first pioneer, blablabla, he even was a somewhat like a soul in the sky watching everything formed, but nothing note-worthy advantage, it was like useless, i dont even know why the author introduced him like that. His personality is cringe for me, i was expecting a somewhat like Overlord vibes, but meh its so far from that.Ofcourse i didnt really read everything, well because its locked starting chapter 40, didn't want to continue cause its boring for me, mostly because already 39 chapters but still didnt hooked me, but maybe, perhaps that later on it'll hit my spot if i continued and everything i questioned so far is explained, but i don't wanna waste coins and pass if im not sure.I rarely leave bad reviews to a novel, i usually support everything because i understood them, especially those novels from originals, but because of too high expectations from the top reviews gave me, i'll be just honest with my review.Well i understand that everyone has different taste, it just disappointed me, first with reviews, and second with what i read from early chapters, i really thought that there will be an Overlord vibes with the way i read it, some famous strong ancestor take over, some benefits and advantages with his state from the beginning, but nothing like that so far, he even struggled at the beginning fighting some mobs(supposedly), in my words, i dont like a grand opening but lame performance.

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