I quickened my pace to reach him and cleared my throat beside him. He did not give me a turn and continued forward so I could only grab on his cardigan. This time, he stopped and turned.
With this, I will start the challenge of cultivating monsters with a girl named Lily. Okay, let's hope I'll be able to have a proper harvest next time.
About Plotting, Emipre building , Romance, Erotica, there are better books to read than this one .I won't recommend you to read this book, that's for sure.Massive amount of info dump since the first chapter.And the writings ticked me off. (i don't know the original writing is bad or tl is bad)It first introduce a minor character in detail (or his cursing) and then jumped into introducing his superior and then the top prisoners he is going to free one by one in detail( they are sidekicks of Oscar i guess).And jumped to a conversation between Oscar and his lackey Domingo.and then they talked about some random guy who suicide for his child to be on Amnesty Order and this Oscar dude interrogated the prison doctor like a boss. and he ate red trout like a boss which his maid prepared. And it became an introduction for Oscar's awesome bg family.he is nephew of emperor etcand vidvidly introduced his sister . And then Oscar remembeing his sister, he and his maid love scene.I was like wow wth. and chapter ended with warden getting trouble with Amnesty Order of Oscar. and cursing this: "O Neil! You damn fatty! Fat pig! You devilish dude. You son of a ***** that eats ****. Do you want to fill the world of the God of Light with sin? You are the most shameless, the dirtiest and the most disgusting trash I have ever seen! You... You... You…... What you really want is my life! Oh god! Do I have to turn my back on you now?"Wow I have no idea who the f is this o neil dude and chapter ended. Thank God it ended. I don't even want to know who the f o neil is after reading one chapter.I am so tired of reading this kind of writing.Now I am thinking Oscar is MC. But Synopsis clearly claimed that O neil dude who is mentioned twice in chapter one is MC. What to do?The lines are endless. Painfully endless.Reading them feel like I am at marathon.I dont even binge read, just read them leisurely but the conversion are so awkward. Info dump after info dump.I casually read other chapters and think their character development is awkward. and story development too, lol (Actually the characters have awesome backgrounds settings, like 90& of characters.)And the author like to write conversation among people and then bam, he explain for a 2/3 of a chapter why this is happening.If I have to nitpick, chapter names are lazy (First Episode: Chapter 1 First Episode: Chapter 6 etc)May be it is just not my kind of book. May be one man's trash is another man's treasure. :)
I’m up to ch 441. Overall if you are looking for something laid back with not much going on this is the book for you. Mc is overly cautious and while he makes mistakes he does what he can to not make the same mistakes again. My gripes about the story is author will say the same thing 2-3 times back to back sometimes to pad the word count. It’s also said every time mc does research on side occupations that it’s okay because he has all the time in the world to learn anything he wants and practice anything he wants. All the while his cultivation speed is just as fast or faster than people around him… so really his immortality means nothing so far. That stuff aside I do enjoy the story.
everything went all bambambambam everywan was ded it was bloody it was awesome
A good story is one where one enjoys reading it, it does not matter if it is cliche or does not make much sense, after all having fun and finding joy in reading it is all that matters
Great book, I love it! This story has a lot of potential
5/5 for warhammer. Nn
I just wish they would update it other than that it’s a good book.
Author’s review here. This is a book I’ve been wanting to write for a long time. I’m so excited to bring these characters to you and I hope you enjoy reading them as much as I enjoyed writing them.❥
This book had me sold. Even the excessive mothering and sweet-loving trope I found enjoyable, despite knowing it might be a guide for the MCs actions in the future. I trusted the author to handle it well and make a good story! But then came chapter 20 and the futa drop (i did not read the synopsis deeply enough). I know some people like this, and if they do, then good for them they have a solid novel to keep exploring. But futa in the end is controversial and such a massive drop at chapter 20 only serves to damage viewership. Such a reveal should have been in chapter 1 or 2. Idk if the novel could have made it big with futa called out immediately, but I would bet that the way it was revealed cut off the books success since it almost felt like I was led on. Again, I know the author called it out, but it was fairly buried in the synopsis (aka after the actual novel description, which is where most stop). I will look out for future books the author writes and wish them Goodluck, this novel isn't for me. Im so sad and wish it was?
it's interesting ... Can't wait to find out more about Tracy and what she's capable of doing