This novel has me hooked the story, characters, and world building sucked me in and I want more. On the other hand grammar is pretty bad I would recommend to use grammerly it's free and will automatically fix basic grammar problems. I cheat and use it on my English papers lol. Keep up the good work cant wait too see what happens next!!!
finally another novel that has everything im looking for, it has great potential and i hope it doesn't drop, still has a few mistakes but it doesn't matter
Hmm, reading this first chapter, I can see the potential of this novel. The author has a decent way of portraying the story and the worst thing to say about this novel should be the cover. Something more exciting or more eye-catching will retain more reader's to click and try this novel out.