It's only the first chapter and the character development is solid. We get background on Kayden as the MC, reasons to root for him, and of course the mystery.Well, there are parts that feel a bit long-winded in explaining something, but that doesn't detract from my enjoyment of reading this novel.
This book is very captivating it's a pity the premium chapters starters from chapter.I do not mind purchasing but before I purchase I want to know if it's worth the purchase.The start is very detailed and it's close to what reality is about.The title dark honor is a suits the storyline.Well done AUTHOR!!!!!Now open a few more chapters?
My first vampire story!!! I must confess, this story is WOW. Thanks author for sharing. I must do the same. I hope to see more chapters of this story.
Luckily I’m early here and I will shamelessly review this 5 stars. That aside, I would like to know if the mc also kills people, stays in the shadows, puts secrecy first in an assassination and doesn’t speak with the target first then kill him.... and if he will accept assassination requests for money. If the author would be kind enough to answer, I will definitely read this book. If they please me ;)
I can't believe it. A good novel in Trial Read.First, World Background and MC Character design is very normal and really not relevant to this novel. MC is more like an NPC who plays different roles, depending on the kind of funeral story he takes part in. Most of the time the MC isn't even there, not even as an observer.Why do I still think this is absolutely one of the best novels on webnovel?Because the author manages to create real emotion in me with every short story leading to and about the funeral of really interesting and unique characters.At least I feel that way while reading, in hindsight this novel is full of cliches and stock image characters.But all this doesn't matter while reading, because the writing, and I assume the translation, quality is JUST THAT GOOD!!!If I ever recommend something, give this novel a try. I can't describe just why I am touched so deeply by this, but please please for once, let a good novel pass trial read.
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Ok a advocate yandere fan I will dive in to this novel and enjoy it to my heart's content but I'll also review more seriously it after 40 so chapters if I don't fall into the dark but wonderful world of laziness
Great story reading the original so yeah I'm just going to give it this because I like the story doesn't mean it's for everyone so take My review with a grain of salt
-Translation Quality (4 Stars)Translator clearly put more effort than the rest of other trial reads who just use ML translations. I would’ve given 5 stars if not for some terms being changed between chapters and some sentences that don’t make since since they’re just translated straight from the original Chinese version but it’s very much still readable-Stability of Updates (5 stars)Duh-Story Development (4 stars)I like the story thus far and it has shown promise to be a good novel in the future. The story is more down to earth with the main character being closer to a normal person with a father, mother and and extended family that he’s close to. Plus he’s not ridiculously untalented or talented and he’s not a transmigrator who knows absolutely nothing and he’s more of a person who has lived 17 years in his world. My only worry is that the author just rehashes the “a war has started and I need to do missions” when the MC enters uni. (Oh also there’s no nationalism until chapter 70 something cause that’s the farthest I’ve reached in the raws)-Character Design (3 stars)Very generic.-World Background (3.5 stars)I like how much information the author seems to give about the world however I would’ve liked it to be given more naturally and less through exposition (that sometimes feels like it doesn’t really matter) which will definitely put off a lot of people. -OverallI like this novel but it’s certainly not everyone’s cup of tea but I found significantly better than the rest of the trial reads this time around and obviously a whole lot better than some of the recent previous batches.
i really enjoy the so different story from the others kingdom building novel"The Lord Of Spectacle". it's really Spectacle, if you ask what so differentthis novel of kingdom building from others novel the same genre,it's very simple really, if you guys remembers from all others novel we read or tested. that the MC of the story, directly gone after transmigrationto the world to be the lord, and always cheat others on the market for selling goods at the beginning, and also from what i remember they never gone to help others only see them as there enemy, and also if i am not wrong we never seen that the country or a city stand behind him and help him out, the MC'S always stand alone with the help of a system, i must say it is a very different and original story for me anyway.i really like this novel, hope you guys will also like it if you give it a try a bit more :)
The novel is decent, not amazing, but not bad, but as I read, I kept on noticing multiple inconsistencies, and also, the MC, Max, is actually an idiot, he has no brains, he’s rash, and thinks pretty much only with his sausage. Early on in the chaps, he says after he got cucked by his friend, he only treats others the way he gets treated, but he completely disregards what he said just a few chaps later. Also, I don’t like the fact that he was flirting with his dad’s wife even though his dad is actually a good guy, that cares for him once again disregarding his previous statements. Like bro, your father was one of the only good guys that actually cared for you, and you trying to Ntr him. For me personally, I stopped reading during at that Prince chapter where he just he gets mad, explodes, and doesn’t even think of the consequences. Once again, this is not a bad novel, it’s just average, you could find a novel like this everywhere.
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