Really likes it so far, early in it gave me some my hero vibes but my favorite part is the Story of the World skill. it reminds me a lot of ORV and the Voice of the World from the book the alchemist. I am looking forward to where you take this story! ? 14min
I said I was going to leave another review and here I am after reading till chapter 78. i don't even know where to begin I'm absolutely in love with the characters and plot, I know there's going to be a lot as the story progresses,but so far, I'm loving this. Highly recommend ????
I can already guess that this one is going to be a great novel. I'm already excited for it ! Please release more chapters soon.
A wonderful, beautiful, enjoyable and well-written novel that combines horror, suspense, action, drama and philosophy, as if it were Game of Thrones, but with a horror twist. I liked it very much. I hope to see it as a digital book soon.
i was excited about the tags but well mc has a very questionable character design it is a bit inconsistentThe story is not that bad a bit average probably not an experienced writer but keep going ;) It is a bit fast pieced so it comes out as some things are missing
What can i say, its just great. keep up the good work or:
though am not fan of system books but am enjoying your book, it's very interesting just completed second chapter
I think this is a near perfect set-up for an interesting story, sometimes its a little too information packed like the author is just throwing it in your face but its pretty well implemented overall, and its a likeable main character. Think its gonna be interesting in the future.
Author seems to struggle with creating and ending conflicts in a way that would keep the readers engaged, for example right at the beginning when he meets death I refuse to believe that death would fall for such a shitty trick lol as that would make death weak even in the martial art world. As well as the way he killed off that one pirate, it was really unsatisfying and lacked creativity.Also the fact that he was supposedly so strong on earth bothers me, a better direction to take would be if he just had impressive martial arts and brought them over and that was it. Because being the strongest on earth should be meaningless in a world where you can break past mortal limits, since even the strongest earth humans are weak as shit. It feels like the author is trying to make it more mysterious or something but really it just sounds silly and makes it seem like he’s reaching for something that’s just not there. He should’ve just said he transmigrated, moved on from his past and never mentioned it again.Other than that I think the characters are rather good and so far the world seems interesting, the fights are also decently written
Review by the Author"Welcome to Football Godfather: The Rise of Ravenhill. This is a story close to my heart—one that blends football, strategy, and personal growth in a way that I hope resonates with all sports and fiction fans alike. I’m excited to share Noah Cross’s journey as he takes on the impossible task of transforming Ravenhill Rangers FC with the help of the mysterious Football Godfather System. With challenges both on and off the field, this story is about more than just football—it's about redemption, leadership, and the fight for glory. I hope you enjoy this adventure as much as I have enjoyed writing it."
Great novel
just started reading this story and its interesting