This is a phenomenal book written by a great person. The author has done well with what is written, but has not finished the story. This is one of my favorite books on the site and I would love to see it finished.
Here before all the 1 star reviews about another ‘sign in novel’ ?
Dreams are always valid or atleast that is my belief. The story line is unique. The narration is neither quick paced nor too slow. It's just the right speed. I like your descriptive language and how you introduce the world .
This novel only show one thing to me. what is that? i tell yah. this thing show how stupid and bad Thailand people are bad or horrible in english language. who ever put this thing in these site and asking people for money. is the most stupid idiotic person ever lived. please before asking someone their money and before translating a novel make sure that you know at least a proper grammar so people could at least understand your novel. not these one. this is almost not readable.
Its better than other novels, just not by much. I find the MC obnoxious and his actions dont really make much sense. Theres quite a few tropes in this novel that i personally find extremely obnoxious, i.e MC goes nuts for random girl #7, the world building is alright, but nothing to fawn over, and the English is confusing but not hard to read. Overall its average, but as the author stated, this is their first novel so its to be expected. Pretty good for a first novel. Though, I will be dropping it because of the tropes. I personally cant stand them.
It starts a bit slow but once you are inmersed in the plot, the intrigue doesnt let go. I would recommend it to young readers who are looking for adventure and mystery involving a bit of history.
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2nd Review cause why not. This won't be as in-depth as the previous one. I only want to touch on one thing that I felt needed to be said.Author you set-up a nice story with an evil protagonist. Now follow through with it, show us his actions and how it affects others around him. Show us how his enemies and possible allies feel about him. Show us this world and how the protagonist navigates throughout the setting. And finally keep your promise and... ShowUsAVILLAIN
world background and writing quality of this novel is top noch ..alas other than that all things gone tooo much down side after begining of 2nd volume (around 120 chapter or somthing) you who is thinking to read this novel be aware ..yess you will gonna like this novel very much because of mc's character and actions on 1st volume but after that from 2nd volume is allllll LOooosttttt ...at one point it seems author himself forgot how he made mc's character and it will pain to see mc's actions on 2nd volume ...so if you like to see how an alfa intelligent ruthless mc becomes idiot wimp beta side character in 2nd volume of the novel than you can happily start reading now otherwise don't bother with this ...i have droped this after reading 2nd volumes 100 chapters of somthing where mc's idiotic actions are hard to bearable and all focused are got on the Fmc ...author if you are reading this comments do work on mc's character if you don't wanna losse more readers otherwise ?
This was an enjoyable read. Having an intelligent MC that actually uses their cheat well is always a pleasant surprise.
i need the raw, this seems like a good read, especially the name of the mc, reminds me of the strongest system. .
Hello, Eshwar here ?, it's chapter 71 currently and the end of Vol.1 introductions. Thank you for reading and Thank you for all the comments, they have motivated me a lot. I just wanted to leave another review after the end of Vol.1 so, I got nothing else to say. [peace out!]