So far, just slow enough to make you enjoy the slice of life. There are some cliche things like handsome looking main character, but the pacing elevates it.The only bad thing I can say about the novel is the translation quality.
Very solid xianxia novel, despite the fact that it's 2022 already. Sets the mood with some of the best parts from the classic cliche xanxias but with a spin (thus avoiding cliches). Has family management, as if it's "Protect Our Patriarch" but more in-line with action xianxia vibes such as "Demon's Diary". World building is decent and has some interesting things going on in background.MC is likeable and strong in character, overall am really satisfied with his reactions, behavior and how he handles situations. Conversation flow is also decent. The world doesn't revolve around MC so far, the author could put him as a third-party, a bystander that just happened to be at a place of conflict of 2 other parties. Bonus points for not being dragged into mess or chased down because of that! MC is not bullied by his family or anything which is quite surprising because the world is portrayed as being quite dark (slaves, backstabbing, wars, sacrifices..).Nowadays there are barely any good cultivation novels, and even if there are (e.g. "Cultivation: My Augmented Statuses"), they follow the newer trends with systems and so on. This one doesn't have a system, really feels as if going back in time (back to before webnovel site appeared) and finding a gem in the xianxia genre. The cheat is quite subtle as well.I have over 1200 titles on my account and have seen most of the ol' and new xianxias. The 40 chapters presented seem really intriguing, developing steadily, worth my time. I'll most likely dig into MTL in the next days. Cheers!
I found this book from Zhanye's review section. Best decision was to check this out. The book is really immersive and I personally don't mind the English errors so it's a full five stars for me?
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Major and constant grammatical errors that could've been fixed with a free app like Grammarly. This is coupled with a main character whose backstory is filled with nonsense filler accomplishments. Overall I could see this having potential but for now, this is not worth the time.
This is definitely an interesting story to get into. Besides having to wait for the more chapters I throughly enjoy this story. I can’t wait to see how this develops further.
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This is a must read! Highly underrated story that any cultivation/fantasy + harem(well written) fan would enjoy. Review as of latest 400+ chaptersReally good writing ✅consistent updates ✅very interesting story ✅deep and unique characters ✅In depth world building ✅Writing:Initial chapters are when author was still learning, so dialogue sometimes felt a bit scripted. Otherwise it improves a lot and for much of the novel there’s a great balance of dialogue, descriptions, etc.Story:The story started of really great. I was looking forward to MC with his “Anti God” powers to solve them mystery of who gave him these powers, and ofcourse reunite with his wife from the past. The false reputation of one of the empires is another major plot point that brings MC to there. Then to another empire to collect some important artifacts. At one point in the story however it felt like there’s too many concurrent or open ends that are hanging. Leaving you wondering when if ever they will be resolved. Eg the 20yr promise, 2yr promise, the shards of the godess, the reunion with past lovers, his own powers’ origin, missing memories, the secrets of the world, etc. I think its good to take things one step at a time and resolve the open ends first instead of continually introducing more and more mysteries which keep readers continually wondering if there is ever a conclusion.Obviously we all want a longer story but we all want open ends to be resolved after being introduced for a while. IMO I think this story could benefit from resolving a few of the current open mysteries first before continually adding more to the list (since there are a lot already)Character:One of the best character developments I have read here in WN. The MC slowly overcomes his past and accepts ppl again. Heroines arent glass vases but all have their unique character and reasons that eventually make them join MC.World:Really big and detailed world. Past ‘modern’ world with “esper” type super powers(?) and a current Cultivation world. The only downside(?) are the names don’t seem to match the cultivation world and things like language details are sorta overlooked. But everything else has great detail where necessaryMust read.
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This feels a lot like the romance in Martial Arts Master and I Iove it. The interactions are nice and feel human-like.The choices are not combat or fantasy centered, but fall into what would one find in a normal society.Hope this gets picked, it's different from most trial novels.
Honestly I really enjoyed this book sad that it didn't get picked to get translated i apparently need more characters to post this review hi