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I will start of by saying, you're doing great writing a story and it's not an easy job. You have succeeded in doing it. Congratulations !!The quality of wiritng is good and had good scope to become an even better writer in the future.The story development in each chapter is slow but very informative and very needed to get the insight of the story, hence I loved it !! Causing impatience means readers are eager to know more about this story.The character designing is coming up well, interestingly and sort of makes a reader keep reading further to know more, but getting to the point was a bit dragged that in between some paragraphs I found myself skimming through to know what it is. But worth it, the mysterious feeling which makes me wanna know more unable to stop, it already a success .Updating I have to say a but slow since it's only updated twice in a week, I wonder if people would see the novel and reme to read it if it lies unnoticed. Maybe that could be improved.The world background. Am applauding. It's perfect and simply marvellous. You have a wonderful insight about things you are wiritng and it gets to the reader well. With the descriptions I could see everything in my head as i read. Congratulations, you're a writer with a future. Keep going and try updating regularly. Fighting !
Its the best thing I have read in a while. Characters are beautifully described by the author. I personally recommend the novel to one who are fascinated towards sci-fic stories.I am already short of words to describe the novel. Just would say, put the novel in your library and enjoy reading, just like I did?
just read to the recent vol (vol 4) and this make me willing to give more review.I never thought the author will go his story to this path. I will said, this is masterpiece.Spoiler, after MC has struggle with every problem around him, volume 4 is the slice of life with many moral lesson that make you tears a happy tear but also a sad tear. Happy because it leads to how MC start to understand the value of life. Sad because the sins that the mc has done in the past, back attacking his moral.
Nice, fast novel with quick pace but world building, system explanation and character background is almost no existing, still would recommend for someone just beginning reading novels
The story is very intriguing and has a good writing style. The story is interesting enough to keep you wanting to read more. Good job Author! ??
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We've all seen the 'on a long space trip so everyone is stuck in a VRMMO' trope before, but I have to say that this is a new twist on the genre. This is more xuanhuan mystery than the usual 'wuxia cultivation overlord' you see. Our MC is drafted to be an imperial detective and apprehend criminals and solve crimes. It's truly fascinating if you like mysteries (and boring if you don't). So far, I quite like it!
So good! I love thw soft hearted hero and his little sister. They make the perfect duo in learning how to play a traditionally kill or be killed game in a non-violent manner!
Its an overall great book. The narration was great and I just really liked this book its very interesting. :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):);):):):):):):):):) :):):):):):):):):):)
I'm a big fan of ww so don't get all angry. you do have to admit that qidian has a better website design to read then ww's. support ww and qidian.
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