Great concept with lots of potential. The best things to work on with a small concept piece like this would be to expand on details and make the story more full and give it life. My advice to the author would be to keep writing and constantly look at others work as well as asking for constant criticism from family friends and strangers(doing great there). Keep on writing!
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I just read the description for the book. But my brain was already exploding from this *****. My God I'm going to read this. Author, if I am disappointed in this book, know that I will leave 5 stars, as the description made me just catch an orgasm
It's an interesting story concept and for now I find that the plot and the presentation of the characters is well written. Now if there was a little more chapter release it would be even better but good if future chapters continue like that i would not complain too much. I really like this story, can not wait to read more, good job author.
i have read ahead and have gotten to some ~200 chapters.from the title you would expect that MC is actually some kind of teacher creating his academy and teaching numerous students etc. if you are expecting this you will be disappointed. MC is just using academy to gather his harem of lolis and academy system is just cover for him to get OP. all of the support characters are young females that are mostly in love with MC.cause of reviews i was constantly expecting for it to suddenly get good like some other similar novels, cause so many ppl did 5 star reviews and were comparing it to them, but that moment never came. there is no comedy and it is rather similar to other system novels. grind, action and nonsensical storyline that is riddled with plot holes and ofcourse deus ex machinas.
TEACHERS!!! Leave the kids alone! ! ! TEACHERS!!! Leave the kids alone! ! ! TEACHERS!!! Leave the kids alone! ! ! TEACHERS!!! Leave the kids alone! ! !
This is really nice author. I am impressed. I'd like to see the end of this book. This book is nicely written. Great book. Great author. I highly recommend this.
........................................................................................................................................It is in my library, recommended
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I think the discrimination of the story should also add “crazy fanatic with following his delusions of be good and serving for god “ the way the mc justify his doings”killings” is just halfassed ,and the flow of the story is not grate we dont have a clear presence of the mc thinking process in the start his family background ,world state and world around him which is not constituent.over all i it 3.8/5 points but the story has so much potential maybe the story could be re edited by professional the it could be one of the top stories with great fame and could be one of those where i would want to wait for its update everyday eagerly.
this is a very good novel. although it uses some cliches, characters are fleshed out, even antagonists, who in this novel actually have a reason to oppose the mc. so although i don't sympathise with antagonists, they are understandable. another example of fleshed out characters is the typical "talent less father exiled from clan" was actually exiled due to being lazy and arrogant. and for once, a young mc doesn't act like some all-knowing being who somehow knows everyones intentions but can sometimes be deceived- though still isn't stupid. all in all, this is one of the best cultivation novels
GUYS HEAR ME OUT THE EUNUCH NOVEL WAS THE COPY OF THIS EUNUCH NOVEL.SO THIS EUNUCH NOVEL IS THE ORIGINAL THE OTHER ONE IS A COPY ...ALSO THIS EUNUCH NOVEL IS MUCH MUCH BETTER THAN THE OTHER EUNUCH TRASH